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In the fight for one mare to get close to the stallion she adores, she realizes there is a lot of bumps in the road ahead... but she might have just figured out a way to help drive on through.
Hope you read that in the movie trailer voice! This is hopefully the first chapter in the Clear trilogy that I plan on writing.
Heh, and what's this? Cover art? Yep! Thanks to my good friend, Audax You can see it in full here: http://aryion.com/g4/view/296093 (Psst, he's doing requests and commissions. PM him for details!)
Also this project is sort of a collaboration! Another good friend of mine, Septia was a big help in drafting these characters.
Also, also, I can't forget my ever faithful pre-reader, Vraddock. Septia and Audax helped too here!
Now without further ado, I hope you all enjoy the feature presentation! Or you have and you read the description after... if so this is kind of like the credits.
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Posted by Audax 9 years ago Report
"10/10 better than yandere simulator"
-IGN
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
"11/10 better than IGN"
-IGN
Posted by Battle541 9 years ago Report
Well I'll be damn! This looks awesome!
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked.
Posted by Battle541 9 years ago Report
Your welcome ^^
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report
Great story!
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
I'm particularly proud of it, glad other people are liking it too.
Posted by Braeburnt 9 years ago Report
I absolutely loved this story! Cx I wish there was disposal, but I enjoyed your digestion just as much as I usually do! It was absolutely amazing <3
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
Thanks! That's high praise! Heh, there will be disposal before the end, but sadly not in this chapter.
Posted by Braeburnt 9 years ago Report
Oh sweet! Cx also, just a quick question, are you going to do any more Male pred? Because I absolutely adore make preds cx and the one story you did involving them, along with FoE was amazing, any more chance of MP in that story, and any one shots?
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
Male pred, huh? Well, I enjoy preds of both genders equally, but when I draft ideas I tend to subconsciously put the female in the dominant row. There will definitely be more male preds in Dusty's Trails at some point. I didn't realise how absent male vore is in my gallery actually. I need to fix that. Although I've got stories planned for a while... hmm. Well, I can definitely promise more male preds in the future, just not sure when that would be.
Posted by Braeburnt 9 years ago Report
Glad to hear! I'm actually quite the opposite, I've always put, and i realize it's kinda the social norm, which a lot of people like to challenge, and I understand that, but I always put the make as dominant and pred, I guess it is helped by the fact that I prefer dudes in terms of sexuality, or it could have nothing to do with that. Just I absolutely love Male pred, female prey, that's my favorite, never been too keen on anything else, I mean I like it, just it isn't the same to me cx, blegh, sowwy for that long ass thing, just telling you way too much probably cx, just looking forward to see more Male pred from yew, thanks! <3
Posted by Vraddock 9 years ago Report
I just wanna point out as well, I feel a good majority of your male vore is ALSO Cock Vore. Which is all well and good, but in the interest of variety...
Also, glad to see this is getting some attention; it deserves it!
Posted by 48th agent 9 years ago Report
The bit where Pale somehow doesn't notice makes me suspect. Either he's figured out she nommed her already but is too nervous to say anything about it, or he's probably not interested in Clear.
*crosses fingers and hopes for the former*
Posted by Cainiam 9 years ago Report
Glad it's got you thinking, heh. You'll just have to wait and see.
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
oh man, well this story delivered.
I love the scenario and the emotions the character goes through, its very relate able as most of us have been around a person like this.
I personaly had a similair experience were i wanted to go to the cinema with a girl i liked and a firend of ours tagged along as he could take us to a better theatre than mine and hers local ones, but the entire time he was just talking and talking like gabby and it just ruined the time, i just wanted to take her to the cinema and enjoy a film.
But anyway enough of my life ramblings, this was an amazing story with loads of relatable chars and scenarios, with great descriptions especially with the emotions she goes through, i look forward to reading the other two seing as its going to be a trilogy ^~^
Posted by pyrolich66 6 years ago Report
Love the AV. It's always nice to see a bitchy character get shown the back door.