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Hydra the goo girl takes a chance with her new friend. It ends up being a mistake.
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This was something written chiefly on my phone over the course of a very long time. I hope it is okay.
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Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Oh my, that would be an awkward trip to explain to any friend afterwards.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
And it probably wouldn't improve matters. "No, I didn't coat myself in latex and strut through town pleasuring myself. I tried to eat a goo girl so I could have bigger breasts, but she ate me and MADE me do that!"
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Just imagining the reactions seem to hurt a bit when one says that she could have made a deal that she could have parts of her sometimes after long enough periods to replace the consumed matter but noo she had to push until the goo girl had to force her to see the other way
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Loved it!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Oh my. That's a very creative revenge Hydra's got planned. I imagine that by the end of it, Sandy's either going to be very sorry for what she did, or they'll have a very close relationship.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
It's certainly going to cause them to be very close. How that develops remains to be seen. Wait... Gosh darn it, did I start ANOTHER series?
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
Probably better to leave it to our imaginations for now =P
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
They sneak up on you, don't they? :)
Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report
Personally, I can't imagine that Hydra will ever trust Sandy enough for them to have a continued relationship, since she tried to kill her. I definitely wouldn't mind reading about more of Hydra's adventures though. Goo girls do offer a lot of fun possibilities.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
It's true. Shameless, selfish consumption with every intention to digest, and for purely vain reasons, is a pretty big thing to forgive. And after five dates, I've got to believe Hydra hadn't developed enough feelings for Sandy to endure such a dangerous and unhealthy relationship. However, the idea of someone starting a healthier relationship with Hydra while Sandy is still inside is... interesting...
Posted by Throat_Wolf 8 years ago Report
Goo job. :)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
*Rimshot*
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
Oh Sandy, Sandy, Sandy...
If she'd stopped while she was ahead, she'd have had SOME to help enhance her curves, assuming Hydra didn't ask for it back, but still. She got too greedy~
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Yep. Greed will always get you. They could even have had a weekly date. Sandy could get a little nip from each side, then give Hydra a few days to top herself off. I could have been a wonderful relationship.
Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report
Actually, partially because I feel inspired and partially because you have enough on your plate as it is WITHOUT a whole new series cropping up, would you mind terribly if I go ahead and write a sequel to this story myself?
I can send you the penultimate draft and make any and all changes that you would like once I'm done with it
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Go right ahead! I think that'd be cool!
Posted by Jones 8 years ago Report
Although it is ultimately up to Marloweny, I fully support and encourage this story's continuation :)
Excellent job by the by. I love goo girl stories, and I love goo girl entrapment/suit stories even more. Your take is quite excellent. Another fine piece of work!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Very glad you liked it!
Posted by Critchett 8 years ago Report
Deliciously written! I am very fond of the concept of having indulgence, especially sexual and ESPECIALLY vorish indulgences, leading to powerful known consequences. It adds the excitement of danger. Considering that digesting Hydra builds up Sandy's most delicious breasts and bits and that Hydra is able to rebuild herself out of Sandy's juices and milk, I feel that the most Hand of Justice punishment that could be meted out would be to forever give Sandy exactly what she wanted. Have Hydra continuously feed herself slowly into Sandy, growing her breasts, while feeding on Sandy endlessly. (or at least during lab hours.) She's in a lab environment and I'm certain someone would want to study this symbiosis and see if there was a limit to how large Sandy could get and whether she gets milkier from her new size and juicier with her greater surface areas for pleasure. And does a process like this accelerate on its own or need help from catalysts. You stir the imagination, marloweny. *Stamp of Approval*!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! It seems like everyone's got ideas of where this story could go. It'll be interesting if anyone decides to do a sequel like Uryx suggested might happen.
Posted by plantdigger 8 years ago Report
Love this idea. If I was a woman, I'd be jealous of Sandy. I was also thinking that she might force Sandy to have sex with other men or women to help Hydra rebuild herself. That could be an interesting proposition. Or even just hold a vibrating toy inside her for hours, milking her... so many interesting ways you could take this. Any way good job! :)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Interesting stuff. This story seems to have sparked the imagination of quite a few people!