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Twilight finds an old book that can hold the peace to Equestria, just needs a little cooperation from her friends.
Quick Request before I disappear for a bit.
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Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report
I love your concept of magically tightening the space inside the predator to hide who's inside, more or less. (At least up to a certain number of characters!) I like how Twilight's belly is still described to be bloated at the end even with the intestines practically air-vacuumed, haha.
And of course Discord would be the one behind the idea. I guess she'll learn to be patient and not overlook anything next time!
Excellent short! These are always fun to read. Keep it up!
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Thanks, this was a very spontaneous story that I hammered out in a few hours, so glad it was fine.
If I had more time, a lot more fluids would have been flying about.
Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report
Your writing speed is amazing. My only hope at making something close to this would be taking it seriously for a few days. I'm sure this is more than fine!
And more fluids, huh?
"Meanwhile, Princess Twilight Sparkle is putting out a house fire with..."
Posted by MutualTaco 8 years ago Report
Don't give me weird ideas, you know what happens when people do that.
Posted by PegaSUS 8 years ago Report
"...She eventually lost control but gained it back as she is now able to float around as if using a flyboard. Kids across town think it looks fun."
(Okay, I'm done.)
Posted by Anabiosis7 8 years ago Report
If someone give you a weird idea, you probably will write a weird story.
Anyway, good and crazy as always.