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Lets see what will become of the remaining vorgy goers.
This is the second half of the story: Vorgy at My Place, The First Seven. http://aryion.com/g4/view/305477
Feedback is always welcome.
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Posted by ToweringValkyrie 8 years ago Report
My only criticism for this is that you spelt "Latter" as ladder in the title lmao. Nit picking aside, this was a very enjoyable read!
Posted by Asntan 8 years ago Report
Not a miss spelling, but I think I my have got my saying wrong :/
Posted by Asntan 8 years ago Report
There, fixed it. Thanks for letting me know.
Posted by Adseria 8 years ago Report
Yeah, that wasn't the only spelling/grammar error in this story. On the other hand, I don't know about you, but I'm willing to overlook a couple of minor mistakes for the sake of an incredible story like this! :)
Posted by JuneMooshiji 8 years ago Report
This. Is. Amazing. I barely lasted through this. I want more!
Posted by abccba0671 4 years ago Report
I feel like the girl who waits always lives.
Posted by abccba0671 4 years ago Report
I feel like the girl who waits always lives.