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Lunch usually goes in your mouth but not for Sarah Shev. She sends her lunch straight up her butt.
Posted by nysmnyd 8 years ago Report
Way too rushed, poor punctuation, repetitive, bland.
Posted by sirvoresalot 8 years ago Report
Ok ok hmmmmmm yes thats good and all but did you like the part about the chickens
Posted by mu70 8 years ago Report
Well, it might be short, but it has so much potential! Short but great read.