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This one was inspired by Marloweny's story "Sexy eXcess Express". (http://aryion.com/g4/view/305958) It's not quite a sequel - I decided to tell the story of the previous occupant of the Doll House. And this one's quite a bit lighter in tone than the original, since I'm more fond of romances than punishment tales. Though there's a bit of the latter in here too. :)
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Posted by acrylic 8 years ago Report
I wrote something similar to it before. But it was written poorly.
http://aryion.com/g4/view/282747
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Once again, you did a remarkable job. Wonderful story!
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
The feels, they ache the heart in the most amazing of ways... Number one top pick, my favorite
Posted by FriedKiller 8 years ago Report
People should make more stories and stuff like this, its entertaining, is mainly fictional, aka, the unbirthing and people becoming dolls, and a few real world things, brides rethinking things and finding true love. I may be a guy and supposed to act all tough and stuff, but I'm a softie for love and all that. This was an amazing story to read and I hope to read more stories like these
Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
Shit, Fuck, Crap, Damn, MORE! OMG, that enigmatic grin as the last line! You evil teasing bastard! Love you <3 OMG, yummy yummy <3
Now if only I did not love romantic mind control, TF, melting... so so so many other yummy themes in here, OMG <3
On a scale of 1-5 you banged a 6! Well no, only a 6 if you give us the answer to that enigmatic smile ;)
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Glad you like it. This is the story I mentioned in email as having distracted me from my other projects. I imagine you can see why. :)
Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
What a lovely distraction and short enough to finish within the week and be edited + proof read <3
Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
BTW, what does "melting" mean in the context of this story?
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
In the original story by marloweny, the occupant of the Doll House has their insides liquify to be turned into assorted products by Madame Divine - lube, condoms, etc. With the individual they came from still getting (pleasant) sensory feedback from them when they're used. I try to use it the same way here, and it's what turned Claire into a deflated doll, as well as what happened to most of Rachel. And I put at least one suggestion in here that someone who owed Madame D too much could melt away completely, if you look for it. ;)
Posted by DresdenQ 8 years ago Report
nicely done, as usual