Posted by Mid_Night 8 years ago Report

seemed Noblemen always be a good target for Bun buns.

except the good ones.

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

But not even~ the good ones are above getting 'snacked' on xD especially when the Den-Mother is involved lol!

Posted by Mid_Night 8 years ago Report

sounds it getting more interest.

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

Yeah it should be much easier to read these now. :) I should have known that you would knkw the definition of a tome...but being a stupid person (when it comes to hard thinking) doesn't help when trying to figure that kind of thing out. ;) Anyways, I was just thinking. How would a "doctor who/back to the future/star wars/...things that i have seen on eka's portal" story sound?

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

Very interesting and VERY prone to stirring 'da pot xD

Lots of people can be kinda 'religious', or would 'politically correct' be better, about some subjects and characters xD

I personally don't know that much about Doctor Who as a series, but what I have seen was very enjoyable. (really loved the "Beast in the Pit" episodes)
Back to the Future... I'm really only seen #2 and #3, but I kinda get the 'basic' gist of things in that series.

And then there is Star Wars.... where oh where to even BEGIN! I grew up watching the "first" three movies and then watching episode 1 and 2 after they became available. Watched three in the movie theatres... and then there is the KOTOR series (still own both games) and the SWTOR online game (I have full Imp characters to lvl 50 and am working on Pub characters now)

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

That's awesome! So a story based on those three topics sounds cool then? Cause that's what I was thinking of writing about.

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

I know there will plenty of 'geeks' out there who would love to read that :)

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

Ok! In that case i will start thinking of ideas. So far i have the following.

-character: based off the doctor, but has nothing to do with him other than knowledge and race (time lord)
-vehicle: modified back to the future DeLorean ( if entered from the passenger side, you get into a TARDIS
-setting: Naboo
-character customizations: futa; lightsaber that doubles as a sonic of turned around and opposite button pushed; brainiac; capable of cock vore, oral vore, anal vore, nipple vore, and vaginal vore.
-body type: has 5 meter cock when not erect, 7 meter when erect, f cup breasts, large assed, cute face, etc

I can't think of anything else, if you have any suggestions, please let me know. I have no idea what else to add.

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

USE DA FORCE!!!!! XD (I just had too and you know it!)

In all seriousness, I would think that she would have "mind control" powers, either Force relate or otherwise, and thus could also be 'very' light on her feet, no matter how HUGE her tummy/body gets as she eats.

I don't know how you would feel about it, or what your preference is to 'digestion' but if you are choosing a more 'sithy' kind of character, then she should definitely have Force CRUSH in her list of abilities, but can only use it on prey inside her; ie 'instant' digestion.

I also think it would be 'cute' if her 'powers' were so powerful around her body that she could 'compel' someone into being her mindslave or 'meal' depending on the way she is feeling. Along the same lines, I also think you should have her 'hairdo' change with her 'mental' state because of her 'powers' (ie sassy hair when playful, wild and scary when pissed off) just to add a sense of comedy to her interactions with other people, since her hair is ALWAYS a dead giveaway to what she is feeling. Also, would make her look REALLY intimidating when attacking someone who has pissed her off! XD

Now, as for the vehicle, I think you should have to where it is 'nothing' like the Tardis when you 'enter', meaning that your character will 'appear' to be getting into the driver's seat of a 'standard' enclosed speeder. Then, when a 'passenger' gets in, they would find themselves in a 'separate' compartment and would then be forced to open 'another' door to be able to actually ENTER the ship, and would end up on the complete other side of the MASSIVE spacecraft.

The reason behind having a "separate" compartment for the seats is to: one, act as 'airlocks' to prevent the outside atmosphere of planets from getting inside the ship(ie bacteria, pollen, dust) and two, that would allow for entry from 'space' without breaking the airlock seal.

OH! I just had a fantastic idea, you could have a 'repair' droid that either IS a Dalek, or looks/behaves similar to Daleks. If you don't know what I mean, go look up HK-47 from Kotor... I think you would be on the floor laughing whenever he talks about his 'targets' being Meatbags! XD I'll leave the actual details of the appearance up to you, but I really think that having a 'Dalek' minded robot, or just a robot that believes itself to be superior to all 'meatbags' but you(it's owner) would just be hilarious!

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

Ok! I will definetly use thoose in the making.

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

This story is sounding more and more like a series in my head. :) (i'm getting a headache since i just finished reading your latest tmv story :) Now i just have to figure out where to start and i'll be good to go! XD

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

Now you understand how 'I' feel EVERY TIME I START A NEW STORY!!!!!! XD

That headache is just your brain churning up all the new information I just overloaded you with and the only thing you can do to make it feel better..... is to start writing/typing! Trust me, once you get those ideas scribbled out, even if it's just a "half-assed" thought, GET IT OUT OF YOUR HEAD! I cannot tell you how much my head has THROBBED while I was churning out ideas for any of my big stories.... The only "sweet" relief is to get those thoughts out in a "permanent" format so that you can stop trying to remember it all xD.

As for a "start" I would highly suggest that you start simple: Craft your character, let your mind "wander" through all the possibilities and let "her" become a solid thought in your mind.

Then, you need to do like what you have already done, by setting up a "world" for her to be in, but now you need the "story"

Here are some "questions" you can ask yourself to spur on those ideas: WHO is she going to be fighting? WHO is she going to be eating? WHO is she going to be "playing" with? WHO is she going to help? WHO is her "rival"/life long enemy?

After that: WHERE does she make her "home" or does she just float around in her spaceship looking for fun? WHERE does she go to for "fun"? WHERE does she keep her "playmates", friends, lovers?

I think you get the point now, but what you need to do is just "start" with creating a character, then you need to ask yourself "questions" about what is going to be "in" her universe, going on "around" her, going "THROUGH" her? xD

Once you get started, just keep writing until you run out of steam for THAT "query" and then put in a new question and HOLD ON OR DEAR LIFE! If your imagination is anything like mine, ANY question you possibly ask yourself is gonna be like a MINEFIELD! You might get lucky and only tap "one" mine and get a small idea... or... you might just hit the "MOTHERLOAD" of all "chain-reactions" and will be stuck for days just "trying" to get everything down xD

But don't worry about "sorting" through everything, just get it all down on paper/word-documents, so that you can later go back through everything and "fine tune" ideas. Not to mention, that as you play with your world and get everything organized, you might actually find that "some" ideas no longer work for your main character, but DO NOT THROW THEM AWAY!!!!!!!

Cause then you get the fun of asking yourself... WHO would this "idea" work for? XD and then you get to make a whole brand new person for your world :D

(You will have a TON of fun, trust me ;P, I do)

Also, you might even find that some ideas just no longer "work" inside your "first" story and THAT means you now have the "ground work" for a new story to be built off of. DO NOT EVER throw away an idea, just tuck it away for a rainy day when you are feeling "tired" of your current idea and who knows... you might just create your own "Emily the Slimegirl" or "Rael the Lizardgirl" for yourself ;P

Any time you see me stop with "The Mother" that's just me taking a break from "her" so that I can kinda "scrub" my brain free of the "overload" I sometimes get from being focused on one story about her. Then, once you get done with your "other" idea, go check back on your "original character" to see what new ideas you might have "spooked" out of hiding by taking a "break" xD

Never, and I mean NEVER, toss out a good idea, what does not work for one character, might just be the building blocks for a new "world" :)

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

(Brain chugs for a few seconds, splutters, then dies.) Ok time to jump start the central processing unit and start writing :) I really have to thank you so much for all your help in figuring this story's basics out. Now I have to spend tomorrow writing as best as I can so I can at least give you a short preview of the story I have stuck in my head. Also i dare not think of the storyline in my head because I will likely forget it the moment I go to do something. XD

Posted by Firstfate 8 years ago Report

Trust me, I feel your pain on getting stuck with a good idea and then forgetting it the moment you go do something xD

That is why I urge you to write everything you can out so that "when" you get pulled away, you have something to jumpstart your trail of thought :)

Posted by voirlopicine 8 years ago Report

I will definetly try it thanks!