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Here it is, at last! The long-anticipated conclusion to my "short spinoff" from The Care and Feeding of Freaky Plants, which will be resuming at some point in the near-ish future.
Sorry it took so long to get out; I got really bogged down with school and work and some personal problems (real life is a bitch sometimes). I also just couldn't find an ending I was happy with. This chapter went through more than 5 unplanned extensions and two major rewrites. In all honesty, I'm still not quite pleased with how things end. I just can't definitively say what I want changed anymore, and just feel kind of burned out
I've got a long weekend coming up though, so hopefully I'll be able to rest up, maybe work on a few more things for DA than I have been in a while.
I am planning on doing a one-off short story for Halloween, so stay tuned for that
Thanks for watching; I hope you enjoy
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Posted by realitywarper 8 years ago Report
not bad at all. everything from the time of her being led to the plant, to being devoured, to the epilogue, were all quite interesting and engaging. with that in mind i felt it could have been a bit more detailed for each part. it would have been nice for her to have said something to her sisters and for the interaction with the plant to be more intimate or predatory. very good as a decent vore story but as a conclusion to a 7 part series it left a bit to be desired in terms of conclusion
Posted by Eater99 8 years ago Report
Thank you for the critique. I appreciate that you took the time to consider and point out the story's faults.
Hopefully I will do better in the future!
Posted by DisposableTool 8 years ago Report
Thanks for writing this.
Posted by Eater99 8 years ago Report
You're welcome