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So, I assigned the five applicable votes a number, then rolled the dice and smaxthedestroyer won. Probed him for some elaboration and this is the sneaky approach he went for.
I know this one's a little short, but this is my attempt to go back to basics. One every 2 days, but short and sweet. If you guys prefer it then please say so! As well as if you don't, heh.
We're going to try this freeform vote system again. Could you try and put more detail in this time, please? It's not just about do we do it quiet, but it's about where we go, how we react to certain obstacles. I've mentioned exactly what Dusty knows, and as Dusty we need to decide what to do.
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 8 years ago Report
As heartless as it is, let them go and sic them on the raiders as a distraction to get us out, we've already got two other ponie's to worry about right now.
Posted by YourGenericBrony 8 years ago Report
I think we should wait a few minutes, and try to surpress our hunger. As much as I'd like to save the final escapee, the pony washing dishes noticed him, and she will call for help from the raiders playing cards to come to her and distract the large mare long enough for us to sneak under the tables to the meat locker
Posted by CaptainMoke 8 years ago Report
We could try to grab something from the table or under it if we are lucky. Then we throw it stealthily at the cupboard. Thus creating a distraction. Next we use this distraction to continue our current path.
If things go bad aim at gun ponies first, as a last resort we have been spotted and they all know our location.
Posted by Anabiosis7 8 years ago Report
Agreed, but maybe better to use disterction to free somepony?
As alternative bad end i'll prefer If Dusty will crawl under a raider mare, get caught and have a ride on the spit with 'cream' filled mare. Or raider mare would slip on something and fall on Dusty and accidentaly insert her in the ass.
About the lenth of the chapter. I like to see more detailed vore and sex scenes, and i think that make it with so short chapters will be hard. Cainiam, what do you think about updating twice a week?
Posted by Cainiam 8 years ago Report
That's a thing I've been considering myself. There's a lot of issues with chapter length. The best solution I can think of is to give vore and sex due attention and the potential time increase involved with those parts, while making the non-vore and sex story parts such as this entry here keep short and give plenty of opportunity for choice. Also I'm really glad to see you trying to discuss the choice, heh.
Posted by Anabiosis7 8 years ago Report
Agreed. Best solution is to make dynamic length of chapters.