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Beer pong but with vore. A group of friends in college are playing beer pong after finals have ended. In their version winner eats loser. Let's just hope the RA doesn't catch them ><

I was commissioned to do this story by a person who shall remain anonymous.

When I got the premise I grinned, I had to do it. I have way too many real life experiences to draw upon. Variations on the shenanigans in this story are things that happened in real life for me.

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iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report

I assume the events this was based upon were different in certain areas. xD Also, you write casual vore very nicely. And this is no exception. Nice work, as per usual!

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

Very much so yes. Very different. SPOILERS

The bathroom door used as a table happened.

Also hauling alcohol through the window and up 5 stories by rope happened.

The best though was ordering a sheet pizza and throwing it out the window... It landed on the RA's car and the alarm went off. That was a thing that happened.

iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report

The pizza landed on a resident assistant's car? Oh my god, that's hilarious. xD

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report

Wow. I normally really don't care for scat and detailed digestion like this. But just holy crap. The way you write casual vore between friends is just. God damn. If I'd been half this casual about sex or even just about TELLING people about vore and been received so well in college, I'd be a lot happier with my life experiences. Or I'd have an STD. The real world kinda sucks :(

“Oh don't be a poor sport, it's just a game." I think I actually trembled when I read that.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

I donned my sunglasses indoors at night when I wrote that line... Or figuratively I did.

It definitely felt like the pinnacle of casual vore for this story. I was afraid people might assume reforming was a thing though with it being *that* casual.

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 8 years ago Report

That was pretty fucked up. 5 Stars.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

This is my favorite comment of the day.

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 8 years ago Report

I aim to please. There was a lot of good stuff here. Particulars I really liked were the gooey squishy absorby (and in the case of the milk, instant) digestion, the feeding the already limp body to her tits (it's so rare to find stuff like that), and uh... I've got a headache so that'll do. Nice job.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

Thanks, glad to hear. I was worried the limp body part might be a bit too extreme. For some it might be but it's good to know someone appreciated it.

It kind of just fell into my lap after I started the whole instant milk digestion thing. I realized if she was going in headfirst she'd be dead before all of her got in. Then I just shrugged and went with it.

kaurendor

Posted by kaurendor 8 years ago Report

Sooo, are they dead? Or did they got revived? o:

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

Oh yes. This is casual fatal vore. Guess I should have added the fatal tag.

kaurendor

Posted by kaurendor 8 years ago Report

I like it~ <3

kaurendor

Posted by kaurendor 8 years ago Report

How do you Upload writings? :/

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

You have to message eka and ask for a gallery

kaurendor

Posted by kaurendor 8 years ago Report

Okay

ErRynArya

Posted by ErRynArya 8 years ago Report

My only regret is i can only favorite it one time