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Hoo boy, this chapter took longer than expected, but I'm glad it's finally done.
If you want to read it in one, huge, monolithic chunk, take a squiz here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1-dHErqq9eLFxUviL5rAQ17mJiX2-JkeiCMwZyknIhso
(Unfortunately I screwed up the formatting a little bit copy+pasting it about, but should still be an easier read than eka's.)
It could probably sit at the end of this story as a kind of finale, as this is really the end of the plot I wanted to tell when I started NGNG.
However, I feel like it's too light on sexy content to be a proper ending to an erotic story, so it's probably going to continue for a little bit longer, and stretch it out to include what happens to Jeremy.
(And why he's nowhere to be found seven years in the future when AGGE is set)
If I do that, it'll probably also contain a couple of chapters of Jeremy and Gabrielle's adventures (Which would be fairly plotless standalone stories more along the lines of Club Food) to avoid writing everything out of chronological order which is starting to give me a headache.
As always, I really, really appreciate any and all feedback regarding my writing.
So even if you didn't like it, if you took the time to read the whole thing, please consider taking a little bit longer to tell my why it sucked.
(Hopefully you do like it though)
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Posted by Capreolus 7 years ago Report
I liked the end of the series, seriously. Didn't expected it to end with a formal D/S relationship, but it fits the character well.
Posted by glargicus 7 years ago Report
Not quite the end yet. :D
Posted by Argh 7 years ago Report
I love it, you're an amazing writer and it's crazy to read a vore story with actual character development. That said, I would loveeeee to see what you mentioned in the description: how Jeremy (presumably) ends up on Gabrielle's figure.
Well worth the wait! Bravo!
Posted by glargicus 7 years ago Report
I definitely will be writing up what happens to Jeremy. The only question is whether I put it as part of NGNG or put it as its own thing. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it! :D
Posted by Capreolus 7 years ago Report
After this ending i doubt he will end up being ass fat anytime soon. Maybe eventually, but Gab seems too involved.
Posted by Alexios 2 years ago Report
Not finished reading this chapter yet but I have to admit that as a bi person I couldn't help but chuckle at the "looks like it was just a phase after all" comment from Eric. Extremely relatable moment.
Posted by glargicus 2 years ago Report
Heh, I'm glad you got a chuckle out of it!