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hasikon

Posted by hasikon 7 years ago Report

so i read that thing for when people comment
and one suggestion i could give is to have things make sense ,for so far this comic doesn't seem to make much sense ,i hope im not sounding rude

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Aces

Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report

That isn't very helpful or specific so yes it does sound pretty rude. :|

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Aces

Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report

Can you elaborate at all? "have things make sense" doesn't really give me any useful feedback what so ever.

Also this is just the comic based on the story. I take it you haven't read the story because we're up to chapter 10 now.

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report

A comic that is aimed to span at least 10 written works will rarely "make sense" with just TWO page. We are the equivalent of about two paragraphs in the first chapter, give or take (ignoring the prologue). What do you expect from TWO pages. If you want more clarity in the story, read his written work. If you don't want to read his written work then wait until the first chapter is done, then if it still doesn't make sense to you, you then may complain.

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report

The only issue I have right now is with Amelia, she is more sexy then cute, more big sis then little sis. Just a small, nagging grip with the discrepancy between the comic, 'novel', and reference material. Not much can be done now, but otherwise I am enjoying it, Looks good. Props for ndnode, his art style will mesh well with your story.

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Aces

Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report

Yea I've had a similar criticism of her appearance. I'm hoping to try to resolve it.

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report

I Love IT :D

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Aces

Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report

Like the new, smaller Amelia?

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report

Yeah, She looks much more like the little sister deathclaw she should be. I tip my hat to you and to ndnode.

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ElJorro

Posted by ElJorro 2 years ago Report

Ah...sibling rivalry.

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