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A husband talks his wife into playing out a long harbored fantasy. But when things go wrong, will he keep his promise to her?
Posted by Tsubasa17 7 years ago Report
well damn man, dark ending. Can we get more with this guy? Maybe something like, his mind snapped from this and now he kidnaps women and/or, possibly, children (not necessarily in that order), thinking they are his wife and unborn child, and then eats them when he realizes they aren't. Well, eats them after alot of "playing" with them, of course! Mwahahaha!
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Posted by Chameleonette 7 years ago Report
Nicely written! I really enjoyed this. The twist ending kind of killed the mood a bit, but I like how you wrote the relationship between David and Camille.
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Posted by Choco0 7 years ago Report
I like the ending, I'm terrible :3
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