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I apologize for the continuing and indefinite hiatus of Jonathan's main storyline (http://aryion.com/g4/view/235666), but I hope for now you might enjoy this shorter tangent to that story, which is a prequel of sorts, featuring a younger Jonathan.
If you enjoy this first part, please leave a comment to let me know! It really does motivate me to write more.~
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Posted by Dangerouslygooey 7 years ago Report
This is amazing:)
Posted by Predator 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you think so! =)
Posted by lyingunderfire 7 years ago Report
Yes! Jonathan returns... in a way.
Posted by Predator 7 years ago Report
Sometimes it helps to revisit a character in a different way, to get a feel for them again =3
Posted by lyingunderfire 7 years ago Report
And flesh out a backstory as well as further develop their character.
Posted by StrawberryStereo 7 years ago Report
I like the little sneaks of Johnathan's humanity.... how he wishes the note were for himself. It would be interesting if he didnt end up eating her... but i think we all know how this ends up. :3
Posted by Predator 7 years ago Report
Besides the fact that he eats people, he's a pretty normal teenager at this point, with all the raging hormones and confusing feelings that that entails. I make no promises either way on Cecile's fate. ;)
Posted by Kougousei 7 years ago Report
You are so fantastic at including little scenes of your predators relishing their fullness, and that's one of my favorite things. The little moment where Jonathan rests on all fours on his bed is perfect. Please do keep writing about this lovely insatiable boy!
Posted by Predator 7 years ago Report
D'aw, thank you! That is one of my favorite things too~