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Tags: Dragon Fox Magic Soft Vore Unaware Prey
Sorry if this is a little raw, my first writing prompt in a while.
No editing, no review, just a quick jaunt in a kinda-naughty magical act.
Please, feel free to drop some feedback, it motivates and drives this dragon to perform more!
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Posted by sharky 7 years ago Report
you know... for a first story its not half bad. I think maybe some more detail on the digestion. Maybe add a tad of a back story some. But the general of the story is good indeed
Posted by DatDandyDragon 7 years ago Report
I'll definitely make sure to flesh more into the aftermath, and about the back story... I'm terrible at that. Working on it in my next story though!
Thanks for the tips, really appreciate it.