Uploaded: 7 years ago
Views: 11,937
File size: 160.23 KiB
MIME Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document
Comments: 18
Favorites: 71
The final chapter! Everything comes together as Delia must decide her family's ultimate fate. Is it better to go back to normal or to embrace the lust, hunger and dehumanization they all crave?
Hope you all enjoyed the ride. The story is over, but the Powers family is far from done. I tried writing this as a series of chapters and I want to know what you all thought. Do you enjoy shorter multiple parts for a story or one long story?
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by Mid_Night 7 years ago Report
finally you have upload the final part, it's has a nice end.
i wonder you going to write more stories like that as well if you can rp.
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
I'm considering writing more stories like this
And yes, I do RP all the time
Posted by Mid_Night 7 years ago Report
cool, well if you like we can rp too.
Posted by Derpus 7 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this series. I love the Powers girls, and I hope you revisit them at some point in the future.
I personally think that the shorter story chapters work better.
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Thanks, the Power girls are really fun and you can do so much with them. I would love to do more with all three of them and maybe a couple helpless victims they can digest.
Posted by Edward 7 years ago Report
Won't spend much time saying how amazing this series was. I just wanted to tell that this made me think about the diference between what we want and what we need. 'Cus Delia definatly isn't the person who has considered this point.
Look! My daughter wants to be eaten alive! Sure why not?
GENIUS, MOTHER OF THE YEAR!SOMEONE GIVE AN OSCAR TO THAT WOMAN!
Just kidding. Amazing work anyway. It gave me lots of ideas but they have to wait till next week T-T 'cus I'm gonna get married, horray!!! Kinda said to move from my apartment, I've build many memories here. But anyway, hope my wife doesn't eat my children when I'm gone XD
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Please, spend as much time as you want telling me how amazing the series is! Delia is in the wrong, I don't make it too clear in the story, but she's screwed up as a mother. She's not a good mother because all that matters is spoiling her kids and having their love. She even acknowledges in the end that they ae giving up everything. She's near tears at the end, whether it's out of guilt over destroying her child or joy over having their love is up to the reader.
Congratulations on getting married!
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
A fantastic ending to a fantastic series :3 fantastic work!
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much, all your comments have meant a lot. I hope I can write more like this in the future.
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Im glad to hear my opinion means something :D your work has always been awesome, so expect more of the same from me in the future :3
Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
*Insert JonTron WTF montage here*
This story is, pardon my french, fucked the hell up. Oh my god. Not to say it wasn't the best damn thing I've ever read, but sweet Christ, this woman has some problems! I certainly had the stomach to read this, but I don't think I'd have the heart to write something so heartbreaking! I really enjoyed this, and as an aspiring writer, I only hope I can reach a point where my writing is as flawless as yours!
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
thank you very much, this story was a labor of love for me as I tried to see just how much kinky madness I could have a family go through. As heartbreaking as the story might seem, I see it as having a happy ending, all the main characters got what they wanted and are happier because of it. Are the main characters degenerates that eat people alive, yes, but they still ended up happy by the end.
Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
I only wish the vast cesspools of my mind could find their way as deep as yours. It is truly inspiring how you find ways to tear apart a family with the simple factors of lust and fear. You have truly turned the word 'Humane' on it;s head, using the most human emotions and urges, and making them turn people into fleshy meat sacks.
Hats off to you.
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
oh my this was amazing x3 <3 Loved every word of this
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Thanks, this story is one of my favorites.
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
I can see why :3 Really amazing work maybe we could get a "bonus" part someday ? <3
Posted by Chaos 7 years ago Report
Maybe.....
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
yay:3