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The HDTF's inaugural activation plunged a whole dorm into a vore-friendly field that allowed human bodies to compress. This is one of the many stories that resulted, about a man making a unique getaway before being caught having sex in his girlfriend's dorm room.
This is a super quick story, written between 3 and 3:30 am before a 5am alarm. Insomnia. Gotta love it.
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Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report
Quite enjoyed this quickie :3
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report
I' currently dealing with insomnia myself due to stress and anticipation in regards to a game release at ten am today but this helped, thanks
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad I could help.
Posted by bartek21 7 years ago Report
Please more
continuation of the story?
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I could certainly see continuing the story.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 7 years ago Report
NICE!!!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by HungryAL 7 years ago Report
Ooh, this looks like it is going to be a fun mini series. I'll looking forward to reading more of these.
I am left wondering if he'll ever be found, especially if she doesn't really notice he's in there :P
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
In my stuff, permanence is rare, so I'm sure EVENTUALLY she'll figure it out, possibly after the rest of the HDTF cast track her down.
Posted by LittleBeast 7 years ago Report
Yeah, they have a tracker for people affected by the HDTF, right? Or am I misremembering?
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
They do indeed.
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 7 years ago Report
I like to think that this is the opening to a an increasingly improbable comedy of errors leads to her repeatedly getting unknowingly exposed to HDTF and losing people inside of herself without realizing it.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
That'd be fun. There was an activation of the HDTF at the hospital, so that's another chance. And she could be an intern at Maxi-Chem for another chance, and she could be nearby when there was that "mobile test"
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 7 years ago Report
Hmm let's see hospital accident is easy, she's there to get a gynecological examination due to odd... sensations. Intern's a bit harder maybe some sort of go exploring with another employee end up in a restricted area and hide in a cramped spot at an inopportune moment. Mobile test, not sure maybe just another sex gone wrong/right incident.
Posted by threk 7 years ago Report
I'm torn in two good directions; on the one hand, I like this because it's fantastic, on the other hand, I'm apprehensive about continuing this specific quickie because I love the ending of her unaware of where he is and him unwillingly trapped inside of her, and a continuation of this quickie would in all likelihood undo that ending (although I suppose her becoming aware and still not letting him out'd be cool, I'm big on the whole non-fatal but unwilling entrapment thing if you hadn't guessed!)
Great work!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks! We'll see where it goes, if it goes. No telling what'll be the next thing that seizes my brain during a sleepless night.
Posted by Adseria 7 years ago Report
Hooray for insomnia!
Also, when the HDTF gets turned on, you misspelt "arousal" as "arrousal."
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
You can never have too many Rs. That's my policy.
Posted by Adseria 7 years ago Report
:D
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Fun! I'm sure the HDTF team will track her down eventually, but until then she's likely to be a bit upset when she can't get him to return her calls later.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
It's always fun to think of the accidental pred getting increasingly annoyed about the prey up and vanishing. The nerve!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
Wow! Love it! I have to second that this kind of ending is amazing to me! I like the idea that she doesn't realize, and I mean FULLY realize, where he actually is, until later when she finally happens to stumble upon one of the mad science kink videos. But in all probability, when someone from the physics dept (Brittany and Jess) go around asking people questions if anything odd happened... she'd figure it out. Still... what a story for them to remember!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by anonymous19999 7 years ago Report
hooray
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
:)
Posted by KalebAdvent 7 years ago Report
FINALLY, unbithing dick first!
Thank you so much for doing this!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
In my quest to write everything at least once, it seemed necessary to cross it off eventually.