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Quick, unedited 1000 word thing, where Clair eats someone because she's amazing.
If you don't like Clair and this brings up bad memories from your childhood, I'm glad :)
Rosa story is next I promise
Have an awesome night :D
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Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
0/10 worst girl stop making me nut to her already dammit
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Go the fuck to sleep
Posted by massvore 7 years ago Report
dammit Clair, you sore loser, you were already hot in my childhood now I cant focus on the battle now -_- (by the way nice story)
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Haha, thank you very much :)
Glad to know that child you had good taste, unlike most people :p
Posted by Kelly 7 years ago Report
Awesome :D Nice so see such a cool story again :3
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Thanks :)
I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Nice job! It's not easy to fit such a complete vore scene into just 1,000 words, but you did it quite successfully. Clair doesn't give much of an explanation for eating Lyra, but... who needs one? The description of her assets expanding at the end was a nice touch as well.
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Exactly! You never need a reason to eat someone!
Posted by Neraciro 7 years ago Report
I imagine the whole Dragon Fang/test (depending on whether it's Gold/Silver or Crystal) is just an excuse to eat her prey away from prying eyes. It lets her turn up and coming trainers into down and going ones...
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Couldn't have put it better myself! After all, there's gotta be a reason Lance has stayed as the champion for so long
Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report
Fucken cruel as hell but hot!
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Fuckin hell yeah! Eating for the sake of eating (and crushing dreams)!
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Great little short story you got here, friendo. Theres no way i could write as good a story as this in 1000 words, so nice work!
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 7 years ago Report
Aww, thanks a ton man! And don't sell yourself short, either. You're a great writer!
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
But im actually good at selling myself short, whereas Ive never been great at putting so much detail into things like you and a bunch of others on the site. So until that time comes, ima go ahead and say your work is better than mine, good sir.
Posted by HungryScorpion 7 years ago Report
Y'know Clair, you and Whitney could really take lessons from Jasmine on how to be gracious losers.