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In which Cal is a gigantic jerk at the construction site, so someone stands up to him.
Meaner than most of my recent stories, haha.
¡Orctober!
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Posted by Argost 7 years ago Report
To point some things out, Cal is used instead of Carl for the beginning until about the lunch scene, and where the briefs show up that Vinnnie was wearing, the line says Trevor instead.
As for the story, an exercise in cruel futility.
Posted by Garz 7 years ago Report
Whoops and whoops!
I guess that's what happens when you proofread at two in the morning. Both fixed, and thanks for catching them.
Thanks for the comment, though!
Posted by Kooshmeister 7 years ago Report
Not big into orcs, but damn, this was sexy!
Posted by Garz 7 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it despite it being outside of your normal preferences. ^_^ That's encouraging, haha.
Posted by Kooshmeister 7 years ago Report
Heh, always happy to help encourage a fellow writer! :)