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I did a thing.

Permanent Linkby Cuddlekins on Thu Oct 12, 2017 8:16 am

Here it is if you haven't seen it. This ended up being a pretty daunting project, so go leave a comment after you read it D: I always appreciate feedback, and I value most of your opinions, so yay I guess. o:

This got so long that I was considering choppin' bits out at the end, but I didn't. I hope that's fine; I wanted some story to go with the vore, this time >:T Though I guess maybe there may have been too much story...?

Anyway, aside from the length, I had 2 little issues: figuring out an ending a title. Title I came up with literally as I was submitting, so it was shit. As for the ending, I settled on that about when I was halfway done with the story. If anyone reads the story as-is and is curious what the lost ending would've been like...

Spoiler: show
Eileen doesn't agree to go with Lucia. Lucia is caught before she even leaves the room, and is slurped up, begging Eileen to do something to save her before being gulped down. Lucia dies alone, and Eileen continues to be a good little doll.


I ended up going with the ending with more sex; how shocking.

Anyway, I'll keep an eye on my inbox to see what peeps think about this one. Once again, remember to comment! Loli Snakebutt likes comments! :D

***Cuddlekin's Vore Stories***
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Re: I did a thing.

Permanent Linkby Death Incarnate on Thu Oct 12, 2017 2:16 pm

I loved the ending you went with
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