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Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Chameleonette on Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:43 pm

So, I've come to a bit of a standstill with my current story that I was making multiple chapters for.

The issue that I'm having is that by trying to get the reader into the canon mindset, I feel like a lot of people might be getting lost or disinterested. And I thought, you know, there's actually a way I could still use the characters and portray their personalities, without the baggage of their canon along with them.

Alternate Universe!

And then I thought, why not kill two birds with one stone? A long while ago, I had been trying to think up a plot for a teacher/student vore story and I just couldn't get anything worked out in my head or make OCs that I thought were interesting and engaging enough. But if I took these fandom characters I've been writing and put them into that AU... the problem is solved.

Basically, my idea is this: It would still be an ongoing story with many chapters of vore with different and outlandish scenarios. How does this work with a teacher/student relationship? Wellll... imagine that the class in question is "creative writing" and the teacher/professor unexpectedly discovers a strange allure to one of his students and is really unsettled by what he thinks about and feels around her. Then he turns those urges to a method that he finds safe to use for his own 'escape' and way to deal with those thoughts and feelings: creative writing, itself. So essentially, the chapters would provide a growth between the characters and then feature something that spurs the teacher/professor into writing out his fantasies as an effort to keep them hidden and give himself and outlet. But of course, over time, the urges and the needs grow stronger and stronger and the relationship between teacher and student gradually gains more tension. ...Which would all eventually lead to him actually carrying out one of his fantasies.

I thought this sounded like a really fun idea, though. I can still feature a vore 'story' in each chapter, and it really would be a story---written by the professor. For example, perhaps something along the lines of what he discussed in class or his interactions with said student might inspire specific 'themes' for him to write about (as certain monsters/creatures, different types of vore, etc). And he would basically be living out his fantasies through those stories. And this gives me plenty, plenty of room to build the actual relationship between them without having to get into messy things like wiping memories or ending everything too soon. And it gives the readers something to look forward to: mainly, when he finally does snap and finds a way to finally carry out what he's been aching for all this time.

This way, I also get to stay true to the character who would be the professor/teacher, as he is a writer. And it puts an interesting spin on things without having his power actually 'make' things reality. And it'll give me ample opportunity for character development on both ends.

So... what do you guys think? Does this sound interesting enough to pursue?

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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Indighost on Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:56 pm

Why don't you just make OCs that are very similar to the anime characters? That's how I started on my first original stories. After that intermediate step, original stories became very easy.
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Chameleonette on Sat Jan 25, 2014 11:00 pm

Indighost wrote:Why don't you just make OCs that are very similar to the anime characters? That's how I started on my first original stories. After that intermediate step, original stories became very easy.


Because then they're not really OCs, anyway. And I LOVE writing the characters in question.

OCs are just something that I'm rarely happy with and in those cases I'm more likely to abandon the story. I don't like pushing myself into doing things I generally don't enjoy.
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby chechico on Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:29 am

If they are the ones I'm thinking they are then I could see them in a teacher/student relationship or a mentor-upperclasman/newbie-underclassgirl relationship
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Chameleonette on Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:31 am

chechico wrote:If they are the ones I'm thinking they are then I could see them in a teacher/student relationship or a mentor-upperclasman/newbie-underclassgirl relationship


Glad to hear it. : )

I'm leaning toward teacher/student since I really like that dynamic. And since there's a pretty canon age gap between them, I don't feel strange widening it.

Thank you for the input! It's much appreciated~
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Imrhys on Thu Jan 30, 2014 12:23 am

OH yesh, this idea has legs! I'd even suggest another way you can get in all your vore itches.

First off, there are other girls in the class besides from your prey girl, so why not have one or three of them come up missing/things happen to them before we get to our main character prey? You can even have things happening because of OTHER preds, not your main character pred.

Second, you could have a side effect of his "power" be that he influences her dreams subconsciosly. So over time, though he doesn't know he is doing it, he is conditioning her to be "his" as he slowly "writes out his fantasies" and in time he sees one assignment from her, the one that strikes her the hardest (horrifically or lovingly, your choices are broad there), and THAT is the foreshadowing of what will come later between them, particularly if it slowly consumes his every waking moment doing "that to her." You'd have space to show his character development regarding it, hers, and you could have fantasy vore scenes WITH some real world vore here and there.

Maybe even after a particularly horrible "loss" in real world, he decides he must have "his girl" before something happens to her/takes her away from him?

Mind you, i'm very horror leaning psychologically, so... >_>
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Chameleonette on Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:57 am

Imrhys wrote:First off, there are other girls in the class besides from your prey girl, so why not have one or three of them come up missing/things happen to them before we get to our main character prey? You can even have things happening because of OTHER preds, not your main character pred.


Hmmm, possibly, but I do like to stick to focusing on one relationship (that's kind of my 'thing'). And I definitely want her to be his first, since she's going to bring about his struggle with morals and character development to the point of snapping, etc. I might consider other disappearances being mentioned, but they wouldn't link that teacher. Perhaps a different one. I don't know yet, though, since I generally like to focus on my main characters and I don't want her getting any inkling of vore being involved (since I want that whole thing to come as a complete shock to her).

Imrhys wrote:Second, you could have a side effect of his "power" be that he influences her dreams subconsciosly. So over time, though he doesn't know he is doing it, he is conditioning her to be "his" as he slowly "writes out his fantasies" and in time he sees one assignment from her, the one that strikes her the hardest (horrifically or lovingly, your choices are broad there), and THAT is the foreshadowing of what will come later between them, particularly if it slowly consumes his every waking moment doing "that to her." You'd have space to show his character development regarding it, hers, and you could have fantasy vore scenes WITH some real world vore here and there.


I have considered something like this, as far as her subconscious finding clues and generally weirding her out (though not specifically dreams--that could be interesting). But I much prefer vore where the prey doesn't expect it/doesn't know it's coming, so if I did use something along that route, it would be very subtle---something to up the tension but not to give away the climax. Basically, what I'm thinking of leading her to believing is that he's coming onto her/wants to have sex with her. XD ...And knowing me, I'll probably find some way to have that involved, too. *cough*

Anyway, thanks for the input!
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Re: Regarding my recent written work:

Permanent Linkby Imrhys on Thu Jan 30, 2014 3:26 pm

Chameleonette wrote:Hmmm, possibly, but I do like to stick to focusing on one relationship (that's kind of my 'thing'). And I definitely want her to be his first, since she's going to bring about his struggle with morals and character development to the point of snapping, etc. I might consider other disappearances being mentioned, but they wouldn't link that teacher. Perhaps a different one. I don't know yet, though, since I generally like to focus on my main characters and I don't want her getting any inkling of vore being involved (since I want that whole thing to come as a complete shock to her).


*nod nods* With vore being a surprise to the prey, I can see all of that. Now IF you want to explain where vore came from (if you are not covering it in his side of the story), showing odd news stories in the background (students mentioning weird stories online or other casual references that are wildly misunderstood by all BUT your audience), or local happenings mentioned in passing stories around school (girl's pair of shoes found nearby a wet, gooey, girl's uniform, but no sign of the girl). I'm an asshat about details and introducing something within story before it actually is used (at least as far as the audience goes), but also LOVE the idea of keeping secrets from characters within the story until it is "too late." *purrrrs*

I have considered something like this, as far as her subconscious finding clues and generally weirding her out (though not specifically dreams--that could be interesting). But I much prefer vore where the prey doesn't expect it/doesn't know it's coming, so if I did use something along that route, it would be very subtle---something to up the tension but not to give away the climax. Basically, what I'm thinking of leading her to believing is that he's coming onto her/wants to have sex with her. XD ...And knowing me, I'll probably find some way to have that involved, too. *cough*

Anyway, thanks for the input!


Nothing worse than misreading signals and never getting a clue what is really going on until waayyyy too late. Though I have yet to finish and post of them, I have story ideas where the prey is either ignorant of vore or thinks "it will never happen here," and the pred takes advantage of the prey trusting them OR uses just enough mind control that the prey feels extra relaxed, comfortable, fuzzy warm, tingly (version of pheromones and/or the vore process has already started WITHIN the prey [for same size stuff]) and THEN the pred gently "takes" the prey, without the prey ever realizing they are in danger. Though I do prefer a third person observing something like this, so THEY feel the horror and get the "OMG, that could be me" anxiety.

But, I'm sadistic that way >_>

And you are very much welcome. Love bouncing ideas off other writers. Rarely are they used, but the new directions talking can take us... :gulp:
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