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Postby Karbo » Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:16 pm

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This time it's 82 pages long, and I'm really happy with how it has come out ! ^_^
It was longer to do than the others but I believe the result is more refined in the end. I have improved quite a lot on my technique, especially screentoning, and the use of more dynamic and varied angles.
I hope you will like this tome. It was a great thrill to do ;)
I'll also add that there is much more vore pages then on the previous tomes overall :gulp: X3

http://www.e-junkie.com/karbo

the manga is 10$, 82 pages long, it contain vore, giantess, nudity, adventure and comedy.
Please DON'T redistribute it !
I also made a little package for those who wish to purchase both the two first tome with a reduction : http://www.e-junkie.com/karbo/product/4 ... tome+1%262 ^_^

I really want to thank every of you who purchased the manga so far ;)
You are those who make all this possible and allow me to carry on. I'm very motivated and full of ideas to continue, working on that serie is such a thrilling experience ! Please don't hesitate to make any suggestion as to what you think could be nice to see in potential future tomes, or to give me feedbacks on what you liked or disliked in this tome. It's very helpful to me !
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Mukat » Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:20 pm

I still need to buy volume 2... ^^; Perhaps after I get my wife's Valentine's present. (are they ever going to release ticket prices for this concert? Seriously?)

But looks like fun! I should have figured that's what the WIP was for, since you'd been working on book three for a while and it does look very... cover-like (as far as the style of previous books have gone, at least.)
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Newton » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:16 pm

And leak in 3...2...1...
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby YuriFan » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:26 pm

HEADS UP: Enter coupon code "READMORE2010" at checkout on Lulu.com - for 10% off any purchase.

It expires January 31, 2010 so get to orderin' soon.

Newton wrote:And leak in 3...2...1...


What are you talking about? The first couple volumes didn't get posted to Usenet, torrent sites, or the various rapidshare-ish file uploading sites. Karbo's work is one of the few things I won't help others pirate because he's just one guy doing this for the fans and not some faceless corporation. A small community with not a ton of income contribution at that. It would be shameful if he lost a single sale due to piracy. Piracy can often help sales but in this situation I think it would hurt more than it would help because there's just not enough people to pick up any slack left by pirates.
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Reiko » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:44 pm

Waaah so much F/M Dx I'd love to get these but I keep feeling like it would be vore I wouldn't enjoy~
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Newton » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:58 pm

rezix wrote:HEADS UP: Enter coupon code "READMORE2010" at checkout on Lulu.com - for 10% off any purchase.

It expires January 31, 2010 so get to orderin' soon.

Newton wrote:And leak in 3...2...1...


What are you talking about? The first couple volumes didn't get posted to Usenet, torrent sites, or the various rapidshare-ish file uploading sites. Karbo's work is one of the few things I won't help others pirate because he's just one guy doing this for the fans and not some faceless corporation. A small community with not a ton of income contribution at that. It would be shameful if he lost a single sale due to piracy. Piracy can often help sales but in this situation I think it would hurt more than it would help because there's just not enough people to pick up any slack left by pirates.


They showed up on Rapidshare dozens of times.

And why do you assume that I support this? I just know that it happens.
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Crownflame » Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:52 pm

I'd still rather have the material book to hold in my hands. I mean, if I just wanted a bunch of vore files on the Internet, I can go look at Karbo's Deviantart.

There's something to be said for having the real thing on paper. (I pursued genuie copies of the Zelda comics for years before they were finally translated- I proudly own one of the original Japanese volumes. XD)

Someday, I'll buy these, too. Karbo deserves a little capital off of what he's done for our community. To see his work in a published form is pretty awesome.
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby YuriFan » Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:04 am

Newton wrote:
rezix wrote:HEADS UP: Enter coupon code "READMORE2010" at checkout on Lulu.com - for 10% off any purchase.

It expires January 31, 2010 so get to orderin' soon.

Newton wrote:And leak in 3...2...1...


What are you talking about? The first couple volumes didn't get posted to Usenet, torrent sites, or the various rapidshare-ish file uploading sites. Karbo's work is one of the few things I won't help others pirate because he's just one guy doing this for the fans and not some faceless corporation. A small community with not a ton of income contribution at that. It would be shameful if he lost a single sale due to piracy. Piracy can often help sales but in this situation I think it would hurt more than it would help because there's just not enough people to pick up any slack left by pirates.


They showed up on Rapidshare dozens of times.

And why do you assume that I support this? I just know that it happens.


Why do you assume that I assumed that you supported this? Nowhere in my post did I say that I assumed that you supported piracy of Karbo's work. ;)
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby MilkChocolate » Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:29 am

Why does it seem that the instant i run out of Money, you pu up a new Tome?

ROFL. I cant wait to get this.
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Deathworks » Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:36 am

Hi!

7.15 Euro (did not apply the code) and downloading right now. Looking forward to reading this.

Crownflame: I have to check, but I don't think Karbo has restricted printing rights (Adobe Reader is actually quite good at enforcing them, it seems). If they are not restricted, you can always print out the manga yourself.

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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby YuriFan » Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:46 am

Well now that I've read the manga, let me just say: absolutely terrific as usual. I can tell that a lot of work was put into this one... unique situations, detailed scenes... it was very exciting. One of the few things I've bought in a digital only format that I feel I really got some value out of.

Reiko wrote:Waaah so much F/M Dx I'd love to get these but I keep feeling like it would be vore I wouldn't enjoy~


Reiko:

I think you would like this manga... there is an F/F vore scene twice... and lots of F/F non-vore fan service scenes... one delightful scene in particular features a micro female (Lea) resting in between the breasts of one sleepy Crisis. :)

the F/M scenes that are there feature male prey fully clothed with much less emphasis on them than on the female predator... you don't really find yourself focusing on the males, you find yourself focusing on Crisis... this is true for the whole manga, great emphasis on the females, it's like the males aren't even there. A good thing if you ask me.

As for Karbo:

Let me just say that, this would be the only thing I'd suggest to improve the manga series? Additional F/F vore scenes would be terrific. It's not that what you do with F/M isn't hot... it's just something about two nude girls in a vore scene... it really ups the ante.

Perhaps, a group of females being swallowed at once would make for an exciting scene. Or an expansion on the concept of two preds sharing a prey with the prey in the middle of a lesbian kiss (as you have created on one of your sketch pages). One of the hottest things you've ever drawn Karbo, imo.

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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Deathworks » Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:26 am

Hi!

About Redistributions: I hope that those who have witnessed such things have reported them to Lulu.com. After all, if you really care for an artist, you would want to protect them from getting trampled by selfish thieves. And even if you do not care about the feelings of the artist, by not stopping the illegal redistribution you increase the risk that the artist gets frustrated and stops making his art available as before.

Crownflame: Yep, no printing protection in place, it seems (at least the printing option was not greyed-out).

Karbo: Yep, that one is another good one. I really loved the scenes between Anna and Melany. And Fiona is a very interesting addition. (Actually, the speech bubbles of the worm thing were really cute as well; reminded me of the things Camel did with the slug thingie in his blog entries).

Please forgive me if I don't go into details about the bad guys' plot, but I don't really like bad guys in vore scenarios - so a matter of personal preference (but outside of vore, I really adore Lord Vader, he is just so cool :) :) :) :) ).

As far as suggestions go, I agree that more F/f interaction can be interesting. In addition, I would personally enjoy seeing even more of the interaction between characters like Melany and Anna. For instance, given the new situation with Lea, the two might compete finding a solution...

The various insights into the character's thoughts are also very good and something I hope will be continued (the harpy's worries were really cute), although I definitely hope that Lea will be alright (both physically and mentally) in the end. Yeah, I am a softy, so I want that bunch to be happy.

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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Angel » Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:00 am

I just bought all three mangas. Definitely worth it. Great work, Karbo!
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Karbo » Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:05 pm

Thank you ! :-D

Mukat : hehe yes XP though I will definitely do more of those ste by step work in the future . I got some great feedbacks from it and people seemed to find it helpful

Reiko : Well there is some scene with female as prey there. Actually the most detailled mouth shots are with female ^^

Crownflame : I agree with you on the feeling of holding the book in your hands. The problem is that Lulu's cost of fabrication are very high when there is lot of pages, because it's a print on demand type. But if I ever manage to find a good opportunity on getting published on paperback, I'll definitely go for it :)

rezix, angel, Deathworks : thank you ! I'm very glad you liked it ;) I really put a lot more time on it and I feel it has paid off. Somehow I'm beginning to get a clearer and clearer idea on how a manga is done ^_^
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Graphis » Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:24 pm

Oh, I'm so happy! This is perhaps the best tome yet. Lots of lovely story and vore in it, and two near-vore f/f scenes (One quite a bit more near than the other!!) Karbo, I've gotten all your paid works, and I am so very pleased with this one. Worth every penny and more.

That view of the rock harpy... best perspective ever!

Anyone who'd distribute this for free deserves to be a corporate slave for life. Support Karbo! Buy now!!
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby temporos » Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:12 pm

I want to buy all three, but I'm an undergrad with no money. :( No Felarya for me...
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Crownflame » Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:39 pm

Oh, hah, I totally didn't realize they were e-books. XD I'd still do it, though. XD

Just makes it all the better to actually buy it- we can help fund paperbacks, which would be lovely, too. XD
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Katojana » Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:07 am

I really like the new one <3
but I have a little critique ^^;
it seems that you're overdoing it a bit with the raster foil (is that the right word? dunno xD)
after some time it gets kinda hard for the eyes (but your shading with it is awesome)
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Karbo » Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:40 am

Graphis : Thank you ! :-D yes I believe it's the best tome so far. Somehow the scenes clicked a lot more together I think ^^

Itachi : Glad you liked it :P um.. I'm not sure what you mean with raster foil ? can you describe it a bit to me ? ^^ ;
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Re: Felarya manga tome3 out

Postby Katojana » Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:40 pm

the "grey" parts in your manga. You you use it for shading.
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