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Postby Abraxa » Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:06 am

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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Sora » Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:32 am

I agree with you Cownugget, and you Deathworks.

Digestion and more Inside stomach shots would make this manga near perfection.

That being said, I can understand and respect Karbo's style, the characters are so well drawn that even without certain further aspects it is still awe-inspiring.

Bravo!
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Cicatrix_Manet » Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:25 pm

Got it, cant wait to read it
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Cicatrix_Manet » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:04 pm

Oh god that was the best installment to date. If there was ever an artist that lived up to 'practice makes perfect' and 'its possible sometimes to improve on perfection' it's gotta be you Karbo. The story was gripping, there were plenty of lighthearted moments, the new style and shading technique is great with such clean lines and unspeakable cute character expressions, and LOTS of very graphic vore which is always a delight.

Karbo, please dont ever stop making my day ^^
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Slash » Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:17 am

Hm , with some of the posts above i gotta say, it's a pretty fun idea to show some non-canon endings were lea gets digested. Like a "comic-short" I think it's healthy to pull a character out of the general settings and just have fun with them from time to time. But either way the manga is still well done and awesome. :)
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby SputnikDX » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:35 am

The manga was awesome. The art is easily your best of all 4 tomes, as is to be expected. The vore scenes were incredible as well, and everything hit home how it should.

The only problem I had was that I had really high expectations on story advancement. ^^;
I understand now though that you're obviously limited to how much material you can put in one manga without it being overbloated, but my biggest anticipation from Tome 3 was some serious conflict finding and convincing Lea to return, and much more involvement with the curse. The search for Lea, while certainly humorous, and having a great vore scene, felt a little fillerish to me. I also expected a little more backstory to why Fiona doesn't eat humans. Luckily, all of this seems to be incredibly foreshadowed for the NEXT manga, but the anticipation is going to kill me!

I do agree with Cownugget, actually. I would like to see Lea eaten in a fatal way, but not in a way to upset the story. Dream sequence, artwork separate to the manga (in color!), anything. There's nothing I find better than having a KNOWN character being swallowed and killed! It's just not the same when some random Joe on the street gets gobbled up, because we see him in the same way as the preds do: food.

Oh, and don't take any of this as negativity. I LOVED the manga, I'm just throwing my critique. :P
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Karbo » Sat Oct 16, 2010 9:18 am

I don't mind critiques at all ;)
And you are pretty right on the plot advancement. The problem is I wanted to do too much with this tome and I ended cutting a whole part of it because I was getting on the 150ish pages and it would have been taken forever to release ^^ ;
So you can definitely expect more plot development taking place next :)
As for the Lea searching, I agree as well. I could have done better in term of tension and suspense there. I should have taken more time to develop it and pose a rythm. Slow at first then, quickening as the situation get more dangerous until the climax. Well I'l definitely still learning ^^

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Karbo wrote:A little "You got digested!" "But I got better!" is nothing compared to that. :P

hahaha :D

Abraxa : Well it' a scene I had in mind actualy. If well pulled it can be powerful ^^

Thank you everyone for your feedbacks, I am glad you liked that tome ! ;)
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby cownugget » Sat Oct 16, 2010 9:37 am

You, maybe a collection of "Bad Ends" could be done at some point. You could have each death scene say "continued from Tome X, page X," and have each scene play out the digestion ending she would have endured, had whatever certain predator got to her. That way people can be satisfied with her surviving throughout the story, but they also get to see her actually melt away in the satisfied predators' bellies in the alternate, non-canon endings. I know I'D certainly pay top dollar for it. :)

That Harpy girl for one... I would looove to see alternate endings where she gets her satisfaction, and satiates her craving for Lea. You could do other preds too, leading up to the GRAND FINALE, where Crisis herself decides she wants to digest poor Lea. You could either do a couple death scenes per tome, or releease one big collection.

It's like Dragon's Lair 2, where the real ending is Dirk saving his princess, but along the way you can see his many death scenes where he is gobbled by snakes, spiders, cats, etc. I really loved that game. But then again, to me, nothing's better than when the hero bites it in vore.
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Doomlycupcake » Sat Oct 16, 2010 10:32 am

yuk smells like fish!
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby Karbo » Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:55 pm

Cownugget : well I'm still not fond at the idea of having Lea being digested but the idea of little off scene and alternate stories could be a nice one indeed ^^ I will study that question :3

Here is a new picture of Vivian. She didn't get that much screen time during this tome but she will get plenty in the next :D

The quote for that one would be : Why did it have to be snakes ?! :-D
Somehow the continuation of an old work ( http://karbo.deviantart.com/gallery/#/dgihtl )
Don't mind the difference in size though XP
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby undertaker13 » Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:03 pm

never cease to please btw manga was awesome as always :D
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Scorpi » Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:26 am

Hey i love that last picture there. I wonder who is going to win in that struggle :)

And that alternate ending thingy sounds very intersting too. Now it's even harder to wait for the next comic !
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Angel » Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:30 am

I got my copy last Saturday. Awesome work as usual, Karbo! Can't wait to see more of that mermaid, I've always liked fish-girls. :-)
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Karbo » Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:08 pm

undertaker13 : Thank you :D

Scorpi : Mhh if you ask me it looks pretty obvious at this point.. I mean just a little flick of her tongue.. X3

Angel : Glad you liked it ! ;) Drawing about Anko was a looot of fun XD
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Ginbug » Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:33 pm

god I love the size from the Indiana Joans one
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 !

Postby cownugget » Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:23 am

Karbo wrote:Cownugget : well I'm still not fond at the idea of having Lea being digested but the idea of little off scene and alternate stories could be a nice one indeed ^^ I will study that question :3



Of course, it would not be canon to the story. It would just be "what if?" situations. Lea is a cool character, and we would all be sad to actually see her go... but having alternate endings where we DO see her get gulped and digested would be awesome, and would satisfy the vore craving in many of us without hurting your actual story. it would also be FUN to see what could have happened if things went wrong.

But if it's just the visuals of digestion that you do not like, there are many, non-gory ways to draw digestion (I could show you some). Or you could do it like the "Fromage" guy does, and instead of digestion, just have the stomach push the prey into the intestines, where you ASSUME the prey is digested.
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Katojana » Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:25 pm

I'd love to see a non canonical digestion of for example lea x3 rawr
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby paolosampietrotti » Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:43 am

good work karbo! can't wait for tome 5!!! :gulp:
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Karbo » Sat Oct 30, 2010 5:27 am

Thank you :)

I have many ideas for it already XD
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Re: Felarya manga Tome 4 ! ( new picture p2 )

Postby Karbo » Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:53 am

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