My first (and probably last) vore-story

[Entity]

I liked it but i quiet like water creatures as the predators.

i give it two thumbs up.

even if it is a bit brief(Not that that's a problem) it's still a vore story and i say again i liked it

Also very good seeing as english isn't your native language.Good job

[Davmil3111]

Nice, that's very good for a first, but I'll say as leviathin, it's a bit too short but it's still very good.

Overall I give it a 7/10, if it was longer I would have give it a 9 ^^