spanxthanx wrote:jaykayeight wrote:Make it a very sad vore story.
I like that idea, but I don't know how to make a vore story sad. In fact I haven't read any sad stories, I have read Stephen King, Jean M Auel and Robin Hobb, I haven't read Walking Dead though. Are any of those sad books? At least it's a new search term for google and youtube. Actually I can't even think of a sad movie I've seen, but lots of comedies, like Superbad. But I've never read a comical book though.
You know, its funny: I glanced over your story a few days ago and somehow in the back of my mind there grew another story about your surrounding
For several hundreds of thousands of years the metabolism of female humans have been climbing. When the hunter gatherers learned the skill of making more sophisticated tools the amount of calories that each hunter could collect increased. The bigger a woman is the more children she can get, so the event of sophisticated tools lead to evolution favoring bigger females. The female humans would grow well past their sixteenth birthday whereas male humans shrunk somewhat and reach their full height at fifteen. An alpha female could dominate a large territory together with some sisters, while keeping other competitors away. They have evolved ways of dominating and controlling the males. The more males they dominate the more hunter gatherers they have to bring in the food and make tools and clothes. One way to dominate a male is to swallow him alive, thus usually leads to the male being let out again in order to be useful. An alpha female would test the loyalty of her males by asking them to let her eat them, although most stronger alpha females can force an average male down their hatch most often social pressure was used to force a male to agree to go down. Today we live in modern civilization, but it is still common for girls to test their boyfriends, although very few end up being digested. Women who have digested more than a couple of men often have a bad reputation, unless the men agreed to being digested, usually due to a dare or on a gameshow.
I thought, that there might be a tradition that evolved during the generations, passed on from mother to daughter. The children might not be into vore from the beginning.
And so as they get into their teen years, during puberty, their bodies make a significant change towards being pred and prey.
The mothers would hide their actual eating habits for a good time, until their daughters come of age. Maybe you show it only by the girl wondering why she doesnt see her mother eat while she feeds on ordinary food. Now during that growing up phase, the girl befriends also other boys. Maybe one in particular.
She grows fond of him and they go through alot, like siblings, like friends, share good food as she gets to know also his lovely parents. Though sometimes they seem to be a bit sad and depressed when looking at their son, when nobody is watching, but share in the happy moments as well. The girl gets really fond of all of them, its a very warm and friendly surrounding - somehow contrasts her own home with her mother being reserved and sometimes even cold.
This all changes as the girl reaches the age of her inaguration. The mother now opens up more and shares her experiences, somehow gently leading her into the secrets of womanhood. She explains the bodily changes of the girl very discretely, maybe with a sense of humor, easing the troubled mind of the girl.
But then shows her the place where she eats. The revelation of this old secret is an utter shock for the girl. She denies and pushes it as far from her than anything. But in her heart of hearts she knows there is something changing inside of her. She craves something she cant find words for... until her mother speaks them out.
The mother explains how she would go about it and, as her daughter got over her first shock, even demonstrates this on one of her meals.
The bodies of the males change also during puberty, but more for their being food. There is a certain way she holds the boy, and rubs on certain spots on his body that seems to calm him down. Maybe he is in some state of bliss or trance with his eyes rolling back, not able to fight the things happening to him.
The girl has to think about her boyfriend all the time. She just stares at the process it stasis. Stares at the boys own belly, still moving in attempts to breathe, while the wet mouth of the mother slowly slides down, claiming more and more of the body.
She wants to flee with her friend. But he knows all about his fate already. He tries to calm her down. She hides at his place from her mother. She feeds only on his food, which is good and healthy in her younger years but not the thing her body needs now. Her health is declining, she doesnt eat at all.
As her condition gets worse, and she wouldnt listen to his pleadings to eat at least a little bit, he gets out seeking help in desperation. She has now nightmares of him getting eaten by everybody outside. She sees him getting pulled by various hands, bodies rub on him, wet mouths opening up for his face, his eyes are white as he is in stasis.
Hungered, troubled and somehow still in her feverish dreams, she flees home and after a while seeking, finds her mother with him in her clutches. His face is just the way she dreamed of him, with his eyes already turned inside his head and white.
She cries out his name but both of them are unresponsive. The pred has her prey. Everything is now merely biology. Maybe his lower body is already well stuck in her mothers mouth with her eyes white as well, unresponsive. The girl grabs his face and kisses him over and over again. Strokes his face to waken up. Her hot tears rub on his pale cheek. But all in vain, after a few attempts to wake him up, she just breaks down bursting out in tears now completely. Her body is rocking and shakeing as she leans over the bulging belly of her mother. She wont let go of his body as it is pulled in further inside. Her hot tears cover the naked belly of her mother.
After the mother regains conciousness, the girl is just croutching and shivering at her feet. She gently strokes her head. She leans over and grabs an old picture showing her
in younger years together with her boyfriend. A silly foto taken in a photo-booth, both are very happy.
EDIT: But maybe the saddest part would be to realize, that this is part of their society. Those are considered merely growing pains. In a few months she might have even forgotten her traumatic experience. But will surely fare with her own daughter just the same way.