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What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore comic?

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 6:36 pm
by GastricAztec
Edit: as of April 26, 2019 I’ve chosen eight eras for the heroes of the story to journey to, sorry if you came in thinking I was still taking suggestions. If I do a sequel, I’ll try to work in some of your additional ideas.
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I’m working on a graphic novel called “Small Timers” about a trio of time travelers, a professor from the year 5150 and a pair of college students from the early 21st century (a guy and his girlfriend), who are forced by a terrorist group to journey to different eras at one inch tall, and one of the characters gets swallowed by a girl (but survives) in each time that they visit. Each chapter of the comic will be 23 pages long, plus a chapter title page for a total of 24 pages. These are the eras they will be traveling to:

(1.) Late 17th century colonial Caribbean, vored by 13 year old colonial girl
(2.) Ancient Pompeii, vored by 13 year old Roman girl
(3.) 1940s Germany, vored by Hitler youth girl and a second time by her older sister.
(4.) 1920s Chicago, vored by girls in ice cream shop before it is blown up by gangster.
(5.) Early 22nd century, vored by high school girl
(6.) Viking era, vored by Shield Maiden.
(7.) 1900s Russia, vored by Anastasia Romanov.
(8.) Late 1950's America, vored by 16 year old female juvenile delinquent

My question to you guys is, what eras would you like to see shrunken people travel to, to get vored by a cute girl? I plan on seven chapters, but if you come up with a better era, I might change it. I could come up with a sequel if I get enough suggestions, and I might use your suggestion.

Edit: I added ancient Egypt it’s based on the suggestion of ItsSomething, that time and place wasn’t originally there.

Edit2: I had to remove ancient Egypt, I had two other times with more interesting story concepts that were more fully developed, so I had to subtract an era.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 6:47 pm
by Hoboman
Renaissance Italy would be nice.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 6:50 pm
by GastricAztec
Hoboman wrote:Renaissance Italy would be nice.


I studied that era in art history class in junior college pursuing my a.a. degree in graphic design, very interesting time!

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 7:00 pm
by Date Masamune
1600s Japan would be fun I think

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 7:44 pm
by ArcaneSigil
Medieval. That's my favorite era.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 8:00 pm
by GastricAztec
So far I’ve got chapter one scripted, and I’m working on chapter two, I’m about a third of the way through the first draft of chapter two.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 8:13 pm
by GastricAztec
Date Masamune wrote:1600s Japan would be fun I think


I’m not personally into Asian women, despite having the utmost respect for Asian culture (martial arts and cuisine) but since Asian girls are so popular, I might do a chapter in 1600s Japan in the sequel.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 8:15 pm
by GastricAztec
CrimsonFangX666 wrote:Medieval. That's my favorite era.


That’s like the era of Brobdingnag in three worlds of Gulliver, they were more primitive than Gulliver (he was from 1702) so that could work in the sequel.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2019 11:51 pm
by ItsSongxing
The obvious answer is Ancient Egypt.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2019 12:01 am
by GastricAztec
ItsSomething wrote:The obvious answer is Ancient Egypt.


How ancient? The time of the pyramids, or Cleopatra?

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2019 12:48 am
by empatheticapathy
Sumer, imperial China, and colonial America. Prehistory (either full-on cavemen or after the discovery of agriculture) would be cool too.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2019 1:04 am
by GastricAztec
empatheticapathy wrote:Sumer, imperial China, and colonial America. Prehistory (either full-on cavemen or after the discovery of agriculture) would be cool too.


They already traveled to colonial times in the first chapter

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2019 6:22 pm
by GastricAztec
ItsSomething wrote:The obvious answer is Ancient Egypt.


I’m adding a chapter where they end up in ancient Egypt during the 13th dynasty, it would be better to have eight chapters of 24 pages each than seven, because the page count would be closer to 200 pages. Thank you for your contribution!

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2019 12:52 am
by Willing_prey94
quick quetsion, but where will this comic be posted? Also English Victorian era maybe? In the middle of the industrial revolution, child labor, before WW1

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2019 1:18 am
by GastricAztec
Willing_prey94 wrote:quick quetsion, but where will this comic be posted? Also English Victorian era maybe? In the middle of the industrial revolution, child labor, before WW1


At deviantART and here, I have a thread in the work to be shared sub-forum. At dA I’m known as acecorona. I’ll post each chapter individually when I finish them, you won’t have to wait for the entire graphic novel to be completed, but each chapter will be completely finished before I post them. I’m not sure if I plan on coloring it digitally or not, I might leave it black and white.

Edit: if I do a color version, I will post each black and white chapter first, since it takes so long to color it digitally.

Thanks for your suggestion!

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 24, 2019 7:56 pm
by Hoboman
It's been a while, but if you're still taking ideas, I would recommend Imperial Russia. Either have them be eaten by Catherine the Great or if we're talking 20th century, one of Nicholas's daughters.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Sun Mar 24, 2019 11:10 pm
by GastricAztec
Hoboman wrote:It's been a while, but if you're still taking ideas, I would recommend Imperial Russia. Either have them be eaten by Catherine the Great or if we're talking 20th century, one of Nicholas's daughters.


That’s a fantastic idea! Thank you. There mission could be to share rocket technology with Russia in the early 20th century, and they interact with the royal family, causing them to be assassinated.

Another time I came up with is 1920’s prohibition era Chicago, where a gangster plants a bomb in a suitcase in an ice cream shop because the owner won’t switch allegiances from the Torio/Capone gang he pays protection money to, and start paying his gang, A girl and her cousins are eating ice cream and they capture the shrunken people, and it is the mission of the shrunken time travelers to convince the girls to evacuate.

I’m going to need to use these in the sequel, because I already have eight missions planned out.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2019 9:58 pm
by GastricAztec
I can’t fit all these ideas into the first graphic novel, so I’m going to also make a sequel, and I have some times picked out.

In book two, they travel to 1920’s Chicago and must convince a trio of 12 year old girls to evacuate an ice cream parlor before a bomb goes off that was set by a gangster who was trying to encroach on Al Capone’s territory.

The girls order root beer floats and one of them swallows one of the protagonists.
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They also travel to a town in the old west, the day before it is destroyed by a flood. There, they must convince a family to evacuate.
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One of the times in book two is Imperial Russia where they meet the Romanovs. Their mission is to give the schematics to 1950’s rocket technology to the Romanovs before they get assassinated. This is why the Russians were more advanced when they launched Sputnik in 1957.

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In book two, they meet a warrior girl in the Bronze Age. There are miniaturized time travelers buried underground in hibernation chambers, and their technology trumps that of the terrorist group that kidnapped the time traveling trio.

The young female warrior has brown skin, black hair, and a thick, muscular and lean physique. She wears a combination of leather and bronze armor.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Thu Mar 28, 2019 7:26 pm
by Jefftothemax
I would love to see, the grunge era of the 90s and the hippy revolution of the 60s/70s. Those would be two eras I'd love to see in a vore story.

Re: What eras would you like to see in a time travel vore co

PostPosted: Thu Mar 28, 2019 8:05 pm
by GastricAztec
Jefftothemax wrote:I would love to see, the grunge era of the 90s and the hippy revolution of the 60s/70s. Those would be two eras I'd love to see in a vore story.


I was in my 20s in the 1990s, so you just made me feel ancient!