Have I created evil?

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Have I created evil?

Postby spanxthanx » Mon Jan 13, 2020 11:12 am

I'm fascinated by the evil aspects of vore, but for the longest time I didn't know how to write an evil character. There's a certain type of evil that makes me hard.

Some people become evil because of their childhood.

Btw, I liked Camilla in Fucking Åmål, great movie.

There's no vore in the story yet, it's not even a complete story yet since I'm just trying to create the characters first. It's a little bit too long to paste here, so link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/18b5I8Q ... sp=sharing

Thanks for reading. Did it do anything for you? Or do I still have plenty to learn? How would you describe Camilla's personality? Sweet and adorable? Evil? Or something that I didn't even consider?
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Re: Have I created evil?

Postby Litenosöt » Mon Jan 13, 2020 6:23 pm

Lol I have lived around 10 miles from Åmål, in Dalsland :D I doubt that Camilla is evil, although I don't remember much of the movie even though I have seen it like 15 years ago. I would like to read your story when it's completely done, if it will be hard vore in it?
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Re: Have I created evil?

Postby FitMe » Wed Jan 15, 2020 5:04 am

There's a lot of different aspects to what makes a character evil and it might help you out to really narrow down what you're looking to convey exactly. To me I see Camilla as "evil" only as far as her lacking empathy. Besides that it seems like she just feels like she playing with a toy. Is that what you were going for?
I think you did a great job using her child-like innocence as a tool to make her all the more frightening.
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Re: Have I created evil?

Postby spanxthanx » Wed Jan 15, 2020 8:26 am

Well I don't think that Camilla was evil either, but she was cool and I needed a name for the character. I like that movie, it's fluid and one scene leads to the other seamlessly. Is hard vore like chewing? Or bleeding? But it's still one piece right? Would chewing a piece of someone's ear of and swallowing it count as hard vore? Because that could be cool.

To narrow it down a little I was trying to make her a sadist that enjoys torturing people, I wasn't aware that she had any child-like innocence because I was going for child-like cruelty or something. I guess that a lack of empathy is the opposite of what I was going for, because a sadist has to have an understanding of pain.

I'll try to rewrite it a bit and bring out the evil, but I'm not sure exactly how.
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