horse unbirth interactive stories (new writer)

[MRUB]

Hello everyone I've written a couple of horse related unbirth stories in interactive format on writing.com

I would love some feedback

If you want to add anything to the stories go ahead.

One of them is by thewriter536 its a section I've added to thier interactive story The Hospital.

The other is a story I have created The Last Hope.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2076321-The-last-hope

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1887162-The-hospital/map/12522

If your interested in doing an Rp some time PM me and if I'm interested ill let you know..

Have fun

If you know about any horse UB stories or images please add them to this forum.

[Mawintarde]

The more I read, the more I felt it was a great knowledge. It is very helpful for everyone to read.