Interactive help and advice

[jak123]

Hey people I'm kinda new to this interactive stuff anyways I would like your opinions on my interactive kid vore reloaded and maybe you could add a chapter or two? Idk anyway here's the link http://aryion.com/iss/page.php?story=516&page=1 let me know if you like it or hate it if you want to pm me I'm open to role play if your into vore with digestion and scat thanks!

[Telhem]

Its a good start but lacks the tree of possibilities interactives are loved for.