Hi everybody:
I have just started a new interactive story (Here ges the link: http://aryion.com/iss/page.php?story=627&page=1). Hope you like it. Comments, ideas and collaboration on it will be welcome. Thanks in advance.
Black Widow´s Resident evil Interactive story
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Re: Black Widow´s Resident evil Interactive story
Well, I will say that you might want to talk to somebody about editing, because the grammar itself is a little rough- BUT that being said, you do a really good job being descriptive, and those hard vore endings are particularly brutal, which is nice.
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Re: Black Widow´s Resident evil Interactive story
Thanks for your coment. I appreciate it. I will try to improve my grammar.
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Re: Black Widow´s Resident evil Interactive story
MrCaliban wrote:Thanks for your coment. I appreciate it. I will try to improve my grammar.
No problem, and good luck.
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Re: Black Widow´s Resident evil Interactive story
I also love them, specially the first ones.
Feel free to add new trheads on it or leave me comments about it. Thanks.
Feel free to add new trheads on it or leave me comments about it. Thanks.
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