Feedback on Pokemon Vore! chapters.

[Xylus]

I post chapters for this story pretty frequently: http://www.writing.com/main/interact/it ... okmon-Vore, but I never really seek out feedback aside from a few people in pm's off-site. I was wondering if anyone here would give them a look if they had the time.

Yes, I know it's writing.com and that site is low-tier. Here's a list of my chapters, which span a few other older stories as well. http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/action/show_chapters/user_id/kraz226

I like this format, and hope to finish a standalone interactive vore story sometime in the near future.