Looking criticism/ideas/help with my first interactive

[Milkyme]

So i finally decided to write my first interactive after having ideas swirl around my head for months, I'd like some feedback on the whole thing as I continue to write it. I'd also appreciate some suggestions for monsters, locations or even plot points if you'd like. Heres the story in its unfinished glory.

[Duke The Wolf]

Nice work overall, so far. I hope you'll put the protagonist's position as princess to use. Maybe situations where she must conceal her identity? Or monsters that are intelligent enough to realize that she's of higher status and want to hunt her more for that reason? For monster suggestions, a few that I'd personally suggest based on my tastes would include:

-Werewolf
-Minotaur
-Snake

Either way, I wish you the best on this.