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Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 12:16 pm
by Brismy
Hello everyone! I've spent a few days working on a little something, and I figured I might share it with y'all. It's called:

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Click on the image to download (mega)

Growing up, you've sensed curiosity, interest, and finally, desire and arousal, upon the evocation of the gruesome fate of some tale character, devoured by mighty and dreadful creatures.
Dragons, gryphons, demons, any of those legendary beasts and beings that deserted your own land long ago, and that still were well and deadly on the continent.


Now you're finally landing on said continent, and ahead, you reckon, you'll find the belly of your dreams.


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Basically, I wanted an interactive set in what I find to be a "believable" world, so I just grabbed twine and started writing on a whim, making everything up as I started.
The layout was quickly done, now all I've left to do is write all the text needed to fill it - which is proving to be the most daunting task after all.

For now I've spent around 3 full days on it, and since I'm a bit less motivated than when I started and have things to do, I'll try to update it through my spare time.

There are "debug", "shortcut", and things like that as selectable choices. Those are meant for me, so I advice you not to use them. I'll remove them when I can.


/!\ What does it feature? /!\
It's meant to be centered on a human character being eaten by fantasy creatures, although it contains roughly anything I find fits when I write. To sum it all up with tags:
[oral vore, willing, unwilling, hard vore, soft vore, sex, bestiality, nudity, anthro vore, feral vore, human prey]
The story also uses a variety of triggers, like player character's virginity. Some interactions depend on those triggers and the way you go through the story.

I might add stuff upon request if I find it particularly interesting and I feel like it suits the basic world building I've done, but priority's on what I've already decided to include.

Content (0.3):
Spoiler: show
The interactive involves exploring this world:
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The areas in [[red]] are not written at all, the [[yellow]] areas are from just begun to half-finished, the [[green]] ones are almost done and the [[blue ones]] are finalized.

Scenes spreadsheet (spoilers!): https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/ ... sp=sharing
Walkthrough (spoilers!): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1giz ... sp=sharing

For now, there are:
-8 willing soft vore scenes
-4 unwilling soft vore scenes
-6 hard vore scenes
-2 human/human sex scenes
-5 bestiality scenes
-1 human/anthro scene.

Vore almost always will lead to digestion.


Changelog:
Spoiler: show
0.3:
- Added the Taïga of Eÿ zone
- Added sex scene with lynx
- Added willing and unwilling scenes with crayfish
- Added willing and unwilling scenes with giant wolf & wolf pack
- Added sex and unwilling scenes with giant bear
- Added the city of Odloch
- Refined stuff in the Lechland zone and fixed minor errors
- Added articles in the encyclopedia

0.22:
- Added saving feature: available mostly after completing exploration of a zone
- Added scenes with Isela and Hafgufa
- Iselandreiks storyline done (only needs refining and interactions with other storylines)
- Added the encyclopedia in Gern
- Fixed gender swap problem after leaving Elgrad's village

0.2:
- Added cover image
- Iselandreiks storyline almost done:
- Added sex scene with Elgrad
- Added 2 scenes with killer whale
- Added 2 scenes with kraken
- Added 1 unfinished scene with Isela


I'm not a native english speaker so feel free to report mistakes and unclear phrasing! All feedback is welcome.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 4:53 pm
by Emberell
Oh, this is looking greatso far. I look forward to seeing what you do with the story and adventure! I love the pure variety you have even this far. Part of what caught my attention was the mention of gryphons and such, but all of the feral companions are fantastic. Both the predatory ones and the lusty ones! I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 9:03 pm
by unicorn
Oh, this is pretty damn good so far. It's obvious that the writing and construction of it are not half-assed. I hope you will continue working on this, it's very promising!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:15 pm
by Snorlaxkid
There's a thread for CYOA/Twitch stories/games in the Vore Games forums, you should post a link to the game in there too, so it'll be added to the list. It'll help people keep up with your updates if you post there too.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:26 pm
by Brismy
Thank you guys! I should have completed the Iselandreiks part tonight - I'll post as soon as I can. Stay tuned ^^

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 5:43 pm
by Krono
This is awesome! You put a ton of work into this and it shows! I'm excited to see more of this!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 6:04 pm
by empatheticapathy
This game has perhaps the best premise for a vore game I have ever seen.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Thu Jan 16, 2020 4:48 am
by Brismy
Thanks for your feedback guys!
It'll take time to get everything I planned to include done, but I'll advance as steadily as I can.

One big thing, I spent all night working on a covert art:

Spoiler: show
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Here's the changelog:
Spoiler: show
0.2:
- Added cover image
- Iselandreiks storyline almost done:
- Added sex scene with Elgrad
- Added 2 scenes with killer whale
- Added 2 scenes with kraken
- Added 1 unfinished scene with Isela

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Fri Jan 17, 2020 7:05 pm
by doomman42
It looks as though there's a bit of a bug when sailing to Heilviska. Whenever I go to sail there the game seems to sudden think I'm a girl? This is after getting the oil, the part with the kraken. I actually did a quick test, going there as a girl, and it started calling me a boy, so it looks like something is swapping your gender when sailing to Heilviska?

P.S: Loving the content sofar! I look forwards to seeing more!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Fri Jan 17, 2020 8:49 pm
by Brismy
Yes, it's been fixed. I'll post the corrected version as soon as I'm done with the Iselandreiks' goddess n stuff.

Thanks for reporting and for appreciating!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Sat Jan 18, 2020 7:05 am
by vernam
Loving the game so far. Keep up the good work!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Sun Jan 19, 2020 12:06 am
by SynxTheLynx
Wow I've been waiting for something like this, love it and can't wait for more!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Sun Jan 19, 2020 4:29 am
by SputnikDX
Is there a list of scenes? In particular I can't seem to find the unwilling soft vore scenes that are mentioned.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 21, 2020 5:39 pm
by Brismy
Thank you all!

@SputnikDX: Added a spreadsheet in the description - I will also make a walkthrough when I can.
EDIT: Here it is. Warning, spoilers ahead: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1giz ... sp=sharing

I posted version 0.22 in first message!

Changelog:
Spoiler: show
- Added saving feature: available mostly after completing exploration of a zone
- Added scenes with Isela and Hafgufa
- Iselandreiks storyline done (only needs refining and interactions with other storylines)
- Added the encyclopedia in Gern
- Fixed gender swap problem after leaving Elgrad's village


Sorry guys, can't write much these days, very busy. Hope you'll like what I can add from time to time though!

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Tue Jan 21, 2020 6:33 pm
by empatheticapathy
There's no need to apologize. You've produced a great amount of content so far. Looking forward to more.

Re: Quest for a belly [Twine interactive]

PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2020 10:19 am
by Brismy
Hey everybody, finally got some time to advance on this substantially!

Version 0.3 available here:
https://mega.nz/#!ElklAITI!foIUn7RK3E9bYgAYhDlcM3kjlrjimyCmGZa-1P_q1mQ


I hope you enjoy it and don't hesitate to give me feedback!

Changelog:
Spoiler: show

0.3:
- Added the Taïga of Eÿ zone
- Added sex scene with lynx
- Added willing and unwilling scenes with crayfish
- Added willing and unwilling scenes with giant wolf & wolf pack
- Added sex and unwilling scenes with giant bear
- Added the city of Odloch
- Refined stuff in the Lechland zone and fixed minor errors
- Added articles in the encyclopedia