E.A.T.U. - Help and discussion thread

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E.A.T.U. - Help and discussion thread

Postby Aces » Tue Mar 24, 2020 9:10 am

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This forum thread is in regard to the story over here https://aryion.com/iss/page.php?page=1&story=727

E.A.T.U. is an interactive story I have been working on for some time, and it is a slice of life style story told from 2and person perspective. You are a college student at the East Adephagia Technical University, where the students and faculty are a diverse bunch of voracious humans, demis, and anthros.

The story's gimmick is that if you die, the story does not end. You can continue as the character who killed you, jiggling as a layer of their hips. :gulp:

I am seeking ideas and critique (and ways to improve things) about the story. I am also seeking the help of other authors. I have contributed a few hundred pages of my own so far so this isn't just some lazy call for other people to do all the work for me. However, my ideas only extend so far, and I would like to see how things play out when other people get involved.

Like right now I am blanking on new and interesting predators and would like people to play with ideas, and I am also trying to condense some branches that feel redundant.
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Re: E.A.T.U. - Help and discussion thread

Postby Shugoki » Wed Mar 25, 2020 12:08 pm

I noticed that the thread has some spots like here (https://aryion.com/iss/editpage.php?sto ... link=44490) where I'm prompted with a text box where I can apparently write some shit. Does everyone have permissions to add to this? I'm kinda new to this sorta thing.
Fuck are you reading this for? Keep scrolling, fool!
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Re: E.A.T.U. - Help and discussion thread

Postby Aces » Wed Mar 25, 2020 1:25 pm

Shugoki wrote:I noticed that the thread has some spots like here (https://aryion.com/iss/editpage.php?sto ... link=44490) where I'm prompted with a text box where I can apparently write some shit. Does everyone have permissions to add to this? I'm kinda new to this sorta thing.


Everyone is able to do that. Red text indicates that a page hasn't been created yet. You have the option to create a page based on the choice you chose.
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