Hey. New here.. um.. long time lurker.
Just thought I'd share a two part story I wrote a while back. Just starting to get back into writing now and could use some critiques.
Thanks
Edit
Well part 1 is uploaded. Part 2 will be up as soon as I can pull up the copy that fidn't get corrupted.
Part 1 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/511520
Part 2 - coming soon
My Vore Stories - Critiques welcome!
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My Vore Stories - Critiques welcome!
by Kyli » Wed Feb 13, 2019 11:57 pm
Last edited by Kyli on Sat Feb 23, 2019 2:24 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: New Writer
by Tassie » Thu Feb 14, 2019 1:09 am
Ask admin for a gallery here. That other site is always broken.
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Re: New Writer
by Kyli » Wed Feb 20, 2019 11:52 pm
Sent the PM.
Sorry about that. I dunno why FA is spotty about working..
Sorry about that. I dunno why FA is spotty about working..
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Re: My Vore Stories - Critiques welcome!
by Kyli » Sat Feb 23, 2019 2:25 am
There. I have a gallery here now and fixed the links.
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