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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:06 pm

Cant wait to read it Zombie :) Any idea on when you might be posting it? The lack of any good stories lately is killing me haha
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Rixx » Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:09 pm

What is your giantessworld penname? I'm interested in seeing what else you have there.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Rixx » Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:09 pm

Forgot to mention, I think a sister would work better than a mother too.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:37 pm

Rixx wrote:What is your giantessworld penname? I'm interested in seeing what else you have there.



Umm, well, I haven't exaclty posted anything there yet. :? So I don't have a pen-name.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:40 pm

Wrote a quick short story. This is not the big one I've been working on. Enjoy.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby amygurl » Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:19 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:
amygurl wrote:well personally the whole mother gts thing creeps me out, when i read a story i like to relate to the character interacting with the gts and imagine my self in her shoes so when the gts is supposed to be "my " mother it makes that hard, then again some people are into that since there are a lot of those stories popping up it seems.

while it's pretty clear what i think one thing you might consider is that if you make it a sister i doubt you will have to worry about alienating any other people who might have issues with a mother / daughter thing.

btw i am dieing to read this one! <3


Well if it helps at all the daughter isn't the one being eaten. :) I see what you're saying though, totally. I don't imagine myself in the story so it's not "my" mother. But if I did imagine that...yikes! lol So you think it would be less creepy if it was her sister? Or maybe I make it a friend and lose the family connection all together. Hmmm more ideas are coming even as I write this so stay tuned...


you know i think that's a great idea, and there are so many things you can do with two sisters, their relationship can be any way you want it to be to fit your story, they could be best friends or worst enemies, the gts could be the younger sister creating a role reversal or older and have even more control over her little sister, personally i think it sounds better just because it gives you more options. :)

edit: squeee! a new story?! i'm going to save it for later :D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Rixx » Thu Aug 11, 2011 10:21 am

Zombie_Slave wrote:
Rixx wrote:What is your giantessworld penname? I'm interested in seeing what else you have there.



Umm, well, I haven't exaclty posted anything there yet. :? So I don't have a pen-name.


Heh, that would explain why I couldn't find it.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:16 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Wrote a quick short story. This is not the big one I've been working on. Enjoy.



Awesome story as always :) u really do know how to write. On a side note, these shorter stories rock just as well as the longer ones. Sometimes a shorter one is needed. People get stuck writing these long epic 10 part stories that never end up getting finished because either they run out of steam or just stop them cold because lack of interest. Dont get discouraged, keep up the fight and trust me, people will read your work.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby supernova » Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:29 pm

Great story! I can't wait to see more!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Star_Sage » Thu Aug 11, 2011 10:35 pm

Not bad, a non-food related unaware vore story, not easy that, good work.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Krauser » Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:29 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:(sigh) Well after all my ranting I have found I've been writing a heck of a lot lately. I thought the urge would pass but it hasn't. I'm writing a big story right now... so big I'm on part 3 already! It's about a woman whose mother has become a giant. The mother stays in the woods at her family's remote cabin, worried about exposing herself to the world. What food source do you think she turns to in order to survive? ;)

This story has been so fun to write, and it's full of ridiculous erotic nonsense that I make no apologies for throwing in there. There's a sexy giant milf, a chearleading squad, lots of swallowing, mouthplay and digestion, alien meteors and creepy supernatural voices.

Anyone interested in reading this? I may throw it up on GiantessWorld; thinking about it.


Dude, I am totally excited for this story man! GO FOR IT!

Mother giantesses are kind of a turn off for me but thats just me, you do whatever

Its gonna be great no matter what you do!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby ElPortero » Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:29 pm

Thanks for posting that nice five-page read; I really liked it!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Aug 14, 2011 2:45 am

Still not the big story...
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:26 am

Good stuff!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:48 pm

Solid work :) :D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby amygurl » Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:14 am

Zombie_Slave wrote:Still not the big story...



i would call you a tease but i can't complain about more stories :P
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Electricwestern » Mon Aug 15, 2011 2:31 pm

I really liked this one a lot, there really isn't enough drunk vore out there.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby ElPortero » Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:04 pm

I'm rather liking this flash fiction stuff. :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Indighost » Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:48 pm

Wow. Zombie_Slave, I have never read your stuff before. I just read the story of the drunk girl, though, and I was really impressed. It wasn't too complex, but the pacing was flawless, and the descriptions were extremely erotic.

I'm not sure what you mean about not quite fitting in at Eka's, in my opinion this is just perfect for a vore site, and we need much more of this type of vore! :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:48 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone!
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