Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby stevebat » Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:23 pm

I just started through the thread and I absolutely adored A Sudden Obsession. Seriously that was a wonderful piece of work you wrote their (I apologize if your offended, I really really love same size stuff)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby nooneudknow » Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:00 pm

Loved the stories, the drunk girl was a really good read even if it was short, can't wait for the new story you've been talking about! Nice work as always ZS.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Star_Sage » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:31 pm

Not bad, enjoyed the descriptions again, can't wait to read some more unaware from you. Giantess City and Giantess Planet have been lacking in unaware content, and Coiled Fist keeps lying when it says stories are unaware.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby team1223 » Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:03 pm

Star_Sage wrote:Not bad, enjoyed the descriptions again, can't wait to read some more unaware from you. Giantess City and Giantess Planet have been lacking in unaware content, and Coiled Fist keeps lying when it says stories are unaware.



I know right? :x Makes me mad...
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Star_Sage » Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:27 pm

The worst is that guy making the photo manips to go with the stories, since he marks everything he does unaware, even when there's no unaware content in that whole plotline. I've talked with a mod about it, but they say it's up to the author to pick the right tags.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby r0nniel0ng » Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:07 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Still not the big story...


I'd like to hear a little more, what was her reaction, did she ever remember, etc. Good one though.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby digestor » Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:00 pm

these are lovely! you've got real talent.

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:17 am

Thanks to everyone for the great comments on my previous story. I really appreciate that.

Here's a new one. I tried out second person POV. It's a writing style that is not often used, and for good reason. It takes some real skill to write a fiction story in this way and I don't see it often at all. But as the ideas came to me I figured it actually might work very well for a vore story so I tried it. The story was fun to write. Let me know what you think.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Electricwestern » Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:34 am

Great story, it's not too often you encounter the second person perspective in a story. It really worked well.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby nooneudknow » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:16 pm

Great as always ZS! You're spoiling us with all these short stories. How goes the other story?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:58 pm

nooneudknow wrote:Great as always ZS! You're spoiling us with all these short stories. How goes the other story?


Thanks Electricwestern. Thanks Nooneudknow. To be honest I haven't been working on the other story. Started up another hobby recently that's been taking all of my time. Hopefully I get back to it soon.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby nooneudknow » Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:16 pm

Ohhhh what's the hobby?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Krauser » Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:13 pm

any news on the big story?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:53 am

nooneudknow wrote:Ohhhh what's the hobby?


Painting, lol. Pretty relaxing actually.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:02 pm

Krauser wrote:any news on the big story?


Currently the big story is dead. :(
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby nooneudknow » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:49 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:
nooneudknow wrote:Ohhhh what's the hobby?


Painting, lol. Pretty relaxing actually.


Nice, would love to see how some of your pictures turn out. Good luck with it. What are you painting currently?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Survivor » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:04 am

You should totally do a Halloween story, with a girl, maybe a trick or treater or something, unknowingly eating someone who's shrunk and among their candy.


I'm a bit late for this though haha.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue Nov 01, 2011 5:24 pm

nooneudknow wrote:
Zombie_Slave wrote:
nooneudknow wrote:Ohhhh what's the hobby?


Painting, lol. Pretty relaxing actually.


Nice, would love to see how some of your pictures turn out. Good luck with it. What are you painting currently?


I don't want to say cuz it's too nerdy ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue Nov 01, 2011 5:26 pm

Survivor wrote:You should totally do a Halloween story, with a girl, maybe a trick or treater or something, unknowingly eating someone who's shrunk and among their candy.


I'm a bit late for this though haha.


Funny you should say that. I had several stories pop into my mind regarding Halloween, but decided against writing them. I used the time to make new photomanips for my other thread.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Star_Sage » Tue Nov 01, 2011 5:27 pm

Hmm, that doesn't narrow down the list of topics at all. Still, it would be interesting to image you painting Power Rangers.
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