Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
C, personally hoping at least one of the shrunk girls ends up in their drunk friend.
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A, D, C, B, in that order.
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D for sure
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DDDDDDDDDD
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i vote B as well. that one sounds the most intersting
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Okay I'm going with story D! Votes were really close though. As to those who liked B, don't despair, it is a really interesting premise and I'll post it soon.
Awakening Her Oral Fetish (F/f, mouthplay, vore, gentle) - Poor Dawn is living life as a shrunken sorority sister after a crazy chemical accident altered her size. During a crazy party, she's about to find out she has certain...desires that she never knew about before.
Warning: mild sexual content.
This story was really fun to write and really showcases how much I love female mouths.
Awakening Her Oral Fetish (F/f, mouthplay, vore, gentle) - Poor Dawn is living life as a shrunken sorority sister after a crazy chemical accident altered her size. During a crazy party, she's about to find out she has certain...desires that she never knew about before.
Warning: mild sexual content.
This story was really fun to write and really showcases how much I love female mouths.
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I know I voted for A, but Awakening Her Oral Fetish was fantastic. I think it was one of your best stories yet, mixing the excitement of vore with lots of sexual emotions. I got so much enjoyment seeing Dawn get off and reading about Monica playing with her. I'd love to read more about the shrunken sorority sister and exploring her oral fixation.
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damn I hate stories where the swallowed victim isn't digested what's the fun in that
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Awakening Her Oral Fetish was epic. I don't think I'll ever grow tired of your stories, Zombie Slave!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing so keep it coming
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bradlax16 wrote:damn I hate stories where the swallowed victim isn't digested what's the fun in that
That's the best part of it, this is fantafy so things that seems impossible is possible, and that's the fun in it, we need more like that.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
If voting is still available: A and then maybe C.
Love your stories mate.
Love your stories mate.
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Hiddenlurker wrote:If voting is still available: A and then maybe C.
Love your stories mate.
Sure. Those stories are done, they just need to be edited for errors.
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theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing so keep it coming
What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you?
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Zombie_Slave wrote:theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing so keep it coming
What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you?
All hot girls must be digested by other hot girls until there is only one supremely hot chick who we can all worship! Like Highlander...sort of.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
C then B then A
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Zombie_Slave wrote:theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing so keep it coming
What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you?
Not really sure honestly, not sure if its just me or what. I've noticed though your tone in the stories has changed a bit. At least from your stories about a year or so ago. Not saying its a bad thing, I've just picked up on it more I guess because I loved your older stories so much
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I would LOVE to see C. I missed the initial vote, so thats what mine would have been.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Could you write a story involving a doctor and his patient?
*Chomp, slideee, gurgle gurgle* Must have ate something off! *screaming*
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