Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Oct 18, 2015 6:49 pm

Krauser wrote:Dinner party was easily my favourite out of all your stories, with served being right behind it. The idea of shrinkies being a delicacy or that eating them is a trend really interests me. Hope you have time for another story soon.


Yeah I really like that idea too. I'm glad other people do as well!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Oct 18, 2015 7:11 pm

cybereel wrote:Dinner Party really was a fantastic story. The Pred's attitude throughout and Megan's reactions were really fun to read. Of course, characters are something you always do well, so that isn't very surprising. Shrinkies on a plate with food is always a great thing, and the catch 22 of desperately needing to explain, but being terrified of getting bitten in half was brilliant. It would definitely make a great comic.


Thank you so much. I agree, shrinkies with a plate of food is really arousing imagery to me. It's very fun to write from the prey's perspective, and of the pred's uncaring perspective.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Celestia » Tue Oct 20, 2015 2:28 am

I must say my favorite stories you've written have to be "Secret agent, Secret meal" and "sandwich mix up" I love them both! have you written any more involving someone getting made into a sandwich to be devoured? if not you should definitely write more of this scenario when you have time.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby mojo-2131285 » Sat Oct 31, 2015 10:37 pm

I may as well put in my vote for "Secret Agent Meal" too. I also really like a story you wrote about a girl in a blue bikini eating a fairy girl on giantess city.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 11-16-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:33 pm

Well, after almost two months I finally heard back from the editor of Vorefan Comics only to have him tell me that he has rejected my script for The Dinner Party. He has every right to do so. He stated the reason for the rejection was that the actual vore starts too late in the issue. That's fair. I believe in telling a story with a beginning, middle, and an end, but whatever.

I was very polite with him, but I can't help but feel pissed. Part of the process prior to a full script was to submit a page by page synopsis of the story. This I did and the idea was approved by the editor and I was asked to submit a full script. If he would have told me before hand that the vore happens too late, I wouldn't have wasted so much time writing a full script or I could have, oh I dunno, changed the frakking story maybe? Sorry..sorry about that. I better stop now before I start sounding bitter, LOL. I just think of all that wasted time...
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby thetrueenigma » Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:11 pm

Dang man, sorry to hear that :( I would say try again but that sounded like a painful process to go through to just be rejected at the end. Keep your head up, we all here still love your stories =D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Nov 16, 2015 11:28 pm

thetrueenigma wrote:Dang man, sorry to hear that :( I would say try again but that sounded like a painful process to go through to just be rejected at the end. Keep your head up, we all here still love your stories =D


Thanks. I should have known to find out exactly what criteria they were looking for before-hand. I'm thinking of resubmitting:

Page 1, Panel 1: Megan walks into a room full of people and shrinks them.
Pages 2-15: Megan swallows person after person after person. THE END

It may sound like a lot of sour grapes but I think that's what they're looking for. Maybe someone with a Vorefan subscription could let me know, lol.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Cuddlekins » Mon Nov 16, 2015 11:34 pm

I'd imagine they're less into actual stories with build-up and more mindless, plot-light porn. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but a good story can really make something feel special, even if it is smut.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Nov 16, 2015 11:54 pm

Cuddlekins wrote:I'd imagine they're less into actual stories with build-up and more mindless, plot-light porn. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but a good story can really make something feel special, even if it is smut.


Well said. ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 11-16-2015)

Postby Celestia » Tue Nov 17, 2015 5:13 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Well, after almost two months I finally heard back from the editor of Vorefan Comics only to have him tell me that he has rejected my script for The Dinner Party. He has every right to do so. He stated the reason for the rejection was that the actual vore starts too late in the issue. That's fair. I believe in telling a story with a beginning, middle, and an end, but whatever.

I was very polite with him, but I can't help but feel pissed. Part of the process prior to a full script was to submit a page by page synopsis of the story. This I did and the idea was approved by the editor and I was asked to submit a full script. If he would have told me before hand that the vore happens too late, I wouldn't have wasted so much time writing a full script or I could have, oh I dunno, changed the frakking story maybe? Sorry..sorry about that. I better stop now before I start sounding bitter, LOL. I just think of all that wasted time...


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that was a dick move on their part. they should have told you up front or at the very least after your synopsis submission what they were looking for.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby blackskies » Tue Nov 17, 2015 7:36 pm

Post your synopsis here and maybe someone will be inclined to make it for the community :D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby bfam » Tue Nov 17, 2015 10:13 pm

The funny thing is it is the slow and well detailed setup which allows tension to build and makes it an effective story in the first place.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby voreguy » Fri Nov 20, 2015 6:51 pm

I'd be very interested in reading the script you submitted, zombie :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 11-16-2015)

Postby PharmakosChroster » Mon Nov 23, 2015 3:34 am

Zombie_Slave wrote:Well, after almost two months I finally heard back from the editor of Vorefan Comics only to have him tell me that he has rejected my script for The Dinner Party. He has every right to do so. He stated the reason for the rejection was that the actual vore starts too late in the issue. That's fair. I believe in telling a story with a beginning, middle, and an end, but whatever.


I get around that problem when I'm working on spec for a fetish zine with a cold open. They have a lot more patience for backstory when you've given them a vignette to whet the appetite. Plus, if you're clever, you can leverage that first scene into a bit of a cliff-hanger which will keep people reading rather than scanning ahead for "the good parts."
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby bradlax16 » Thu Apr 28, 2016 8:20 am

where have you been ZS? hope everything is going well, we miss your stories around here!!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Hiddenlurker » Thu Apr 28, 2016 1:24 pm

Awww man, I saw the first bit of the date and was like "woo! New story!" and then I saw the year. :(

Really miss ZS stories.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby rugli » Fri Jun 17, 2016 3:55 pm

He Last visited:Fri Jun 17, 2016 11:45 am

form his user page. But doesn't seem there is much happeining with his writting currently for what reason I don't know. maybe its because that script was turned down.
But perhaps he should consider another artist.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue Jun 21, 2016 8:15 am

Hi everyone, I know I have been silent for awhile but just wanted to let you know that I just haven't been writing for a long time. I've made some photomanips on my other thread, but just haven't been writing stories. To be frank, I just haven't had the time or the desire lately. Maybe the script rejection had something to do with it; I really haven't tried to write anything since then. I just haven't felt the urge to sit in front of the keyboard for hours again. Hopefully that will change.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Krauser » Mon Aug 01, 2016 5:10 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Hi everyone, I know I have been silent for awhile but just wanted to let you know that I just haven't been writing for a long time. I've made some photomanips on my other thread, but just haven't been writing stories. To be frank, I just haven't had the time or the desire lately. Maybe the script rejection had something to do with it; I really haven't tried to write anything since then. I just haven't felt the urge to sit in front of the keyboard for hours again. Hopefully that will change.



I'll be honest with you man, vorefan sucks mega dick. Their content sucks. Their writers suck. Their art sucks. I've had a chance to read many of their comics and they are all poorly done with minimal amounts of vore content and the rest being uninteresting bullshit. The only remotely good one was varsity chews and thats not saying a lot. That was very short and had roughly 3/4 very brief vore scenes. They would learn a lot by making their vore content fill a lot more of their comics like Karbo does. He's the master of vore comics. To be honest you didn't miss out on much. I've heard that their writers and artists arent actually into vore, which would explain why their content is so stale and uninspired. If you really want to work on a comic hit up some other artists and see if theyd be interested, maybe you could both make cash off of it. If you combined your writing and their art you would be outstanding.

Don't feel bad about them not picking you up, its just another sign that they produce low quality content and cannot see a good opportunity when presented with one. If they had any brains they'd hire someone who is actually into vore.

Id really advise against anyone buying vorefan content unless you are real desperate for a fix, and even then, theres better stuff out there. You can get way better shit from karbo on his patreon for 1 buck a month, i dont know how they are in business with such shitty comics.

I hope you feel better man you are one of the best writers out there. I still read dinner party from time to time even though you released it so long ago, I think its one of your best. When I read a vorefan comic, its usually just once and then never again.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

Postby Celestia » Mon Aug 01, 2016 9:56 pm

Krauser wrote:
Zombie_Slave wrote:Hi everyone, I know I have been silent for awhile but just wanted to let you know that I just haven't been writing for a long time. I've made some photomanips on my other thread, but just haven't been writing stories. To be frank, I just haven't had the time or the desire lately. Maybe the script rejection had something to do with it; I really haven't tried to write anything since then. I just haven't felt the urge to sit in front of the keyboard for hours again. Hopefully that will change.



I'll be honest with you man, vorefan sucks mega dick. Their content sucks. Their writers suck. Their art sucks. I've had a chance to read many of their comics and they are all poorly done with minimal amounts of vore content and the rest being uninteresting bullshit. The only remotely good one was varsity chews and thats not saying a lot. That was very short and had roughly 3/4 very brief vore scenes. They would learn a lot by making their vore content fill a lot more of their comics like Karbo does. He's the master of vore comics. To be honest you didn't miss out on much. I've heard that their writers and artists arent actually into vore, which would explain why their content is so stale and uninspired. If you really want to work on a comic hit up some other artists and see if theyd be interested, maybe you could both make cash off of it. If you combined your writing and their art you would be outstanding.

Don't feel bad about them not picking you up, its just another sign that they produce low quality content and cannot see a good opportunity when presented with one. If they had any brains they'd hire someone who is actually into vore.

Id really advise against anyone buying vorefan content unless you are real desperate for a fix, and even then, theres better stuff out there. You can get way better shit from karbo on his patreon for 1 buck a month, i dont know how they are in business with such shitty comics.

I hope you feel better man you are one of the best writers out there. I still read dinner party from time to time even though you released it so long ago, I think its one of your best. When I read a vorefan comic, its usually just once and then never again.


I can confirm that Vore fan comics sucks. I got the chance to read varsity chews and it was super disappointing. the promotion behind it makes it seem like the whole issue is going to have a bunch of prep stuff in it but in the actual comic you only get this one scene up front that involves very minor prep and food related stuff. then the rest of the issue has nothing to do with the premise they set up in the promotion or the first few pages in the first place. they're a bunch of dishonest hacks and you're better off without them Zombie Slave. besides, your work is at least a hundred times better than anything they've put out.
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