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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:09 pm

My computer was making Eka's all screwy.

More artwork? Goddesses. Although i do have another f/m idea in mind....
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:12 pm

Hi!

You know Pandora's box? You showed people something they liked, and that has basically the same effect here - now they will haunt you for the rest of your life :) :) :) :)

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Ryan-Drakel » Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:24 pm

Hey, what can I say?? You drew Ruto so well she's both sexy and cute. ^///^
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:36 pm

Oh yes, Pandora's box. Lovely. i always imagined myself being stupid enough to open it XD

*sigh* i gotta go draw Link. all these sparkly-eyed girls are making me lose my touch. I was thinking covering Link with epic tattoos. ^w^
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:09 pm

how am I the weird one? I just came up with a small anecdote on the dangers of trying new things starring Luna where she started to really enjoy drawing female preds, then became a female pred herself, loses control to her instincts, and then eats and digests her favorite video game character of all time. Now if I had continued the anecdote and went into a story about since the hero of time was now no more then a little extra padding, that Luna would have to take his place as the hero of time since she got the triforce of courage from digesting him. Then she went on the epic quest link was supposed to take and wound up saving hyrule by eating Gannon, but then had a terrible stomachache cause digesting pure evil hurts. Then you could call me a little weird... But not for the first part

oh and go ahead and draw Link Luna... after two female preds I think you've earned some time with your crush
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Tue Feb 09, 2010 5:31 pm

O___o
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby cliff1 » Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:52 pm

LunaTheWolf wrote:Get your paws off my Link plushie. D<
or i'll make a catgirl HIS prey!! muahhaa!


DO IT! DO IT!
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:03 pm

cliff1 wrote:
LunaTheWolf wrote:Get your paws off my Link plushie. D<
or i'll make a catgirl HIS prey!! muahhaa!


DO IT! DO IT!


No don't do it! I gave her the gift of hearing my wild rambling stories! And catgirls get eaten wayyyy too much! They need some more lovin as preds ya know?
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:44 am

Hi!

LunaTheWolf wrote:*sigh* i gotta go draw Link. all these sparkly-eyed girls are making me lose my touch. I was thinking covering Link with epic tattoos. ^w^


So, how are things going?

Just a thought so, tattoos are also pictures, so you could actually draw Link and still have some sparkly-eyed girls - just imagine link having a large tatoo of young princess Ruto being swallowed by a cute, little naga right there on his back.... - an F/f situation while you actually draw just a single male character :) :) :) :)

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Thu Feb 11, 2010 12:59 pm

Woah... a vore tatoo 0__0 never thought of that, hmh!

Although, actually i decided to change the tattoos to blood, so it rather seems as though he slaughtered somebody. It was quite fun.
As for your little ruto idea, i'm sure it would come out better if it weren't all tatoo-ified X3 peeeeerrrrrrhaps i will give it a thought to try out. I know you guys are all quite happy with teh femalez.

But... The_Prof!! What if I'M the catgirl??? XDDDD THEN it can pass off >3
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:50 pm

LunaTheWolf wrote:Woah... a vore tatoo 0__0 never thought of that, hmh!

Although, actually i decided to change the tattoos to blood, so it rather seems as though he slaughtered somebody. It was quite fun.
As for your little ruto idea, i'm sure it would come out better if it weren't all tatoo-ified X3 peeeeerrrrrrhaps i will give it a thought to try out. I know you guys are all quite happy with teh femalez.

But... The_Prof!! What if I'M the catgirl??? XDDDD THEN it can pass off >3


well if you're the catgirl well then I really can't stop you from feeding yourself to someone else...
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:05 pm

Hi!

I am just glad you found my vore tatoo idea inspiring - and I am not talking about the F/f aspect, but the concept of a vorish tatoo as such. Isn't this part of what this community is also about - inspiration?

Well, talking about inspiration, our discussion about Pandora's Box inspired me to do a 4 koma. I have to apologize for the poor quality - I am still rather rusty and with the 4 koma, it becomes much more obvious. Still, I hope you guys enjoy the idea in spite of the graphical deficiencies.

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Fellow Party Member(s)


Below a commented translation (I recommend to those who can read Japanese to read the 4 koma first and look at the translation later as it might spoil things for them/give too many hints.

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Party Member(s) [singular and plural is ambiguous in Japanese unless explicitly marked. The term used for "members" here implies also a certain closeness, so we can also talk about a fellowship]
Panel 1:
Luna: Ahem, couldn't you move a little bit away?[ meaning that she should not stick so closely to her]
Pandora's Box: No . Chance ! [ this is actually difficult to translate. She splits the two-syllable word "dame" into two. "Dame" means "impossible", "can't be done". Splitting it in two like that is a common playful emphasis, often combined with female characters teasing males]
Sound Effects: Mogu mogu [that is the sound of moving something in your mouth, not really chewing but moving]
Toko ton [A clapping sound I use to describe the box jumping from corner to corner in order to "walk"]

Panel 2:
Pandora's Box: Because Luna-neesama is the person who opened me, I will not leave your side for the rest of my life. [ well, that is the meaning. Note that "neesama" is a relatively fixed combination found in yuri manga where the female lovers are often depicted to be in a fake younger sister - elder sister relationship. Besides other things, the "nee" part means elder sister. "sama" is a respectful adress. "nee-sama" is a standard way for infatuated female characters to address socially higher ranking/elder sister characters they love]
Sound Effects: Rero rero [that is the standard sound word for licking]
Toko ton [see panel 1]

Panel 3:
Luna: Then, another thing [I know, "then" sounds a bit awkward, but I can't think of a better translation. She is continuing her conversation there]
Sound Effects: Gucha gucha [a standard wet sound of something being kneaded/moved in a wet environment]
Toko ton [see panel 1]

Panel 4:
Luna: Why are you licking [ on ] a [ fellow ] party member!? ["party member" uses the same characters as in the title. Note that Japanese questions can be marked by particles, which is why I don't need the question mark]
Pandora's Box: Because she is tasty. Because I am not eating her or anything, it shouldn't be a problem. [the last part expresses that she expects agreement] ... Ah! She has escaped! [marked for feeling regret about the escape]
Sound Effect: Guwa [standard yawning sound word for a monster's mouth yawning open]
Catgirl fairy [sorry, I have no name for her yet]: I am saved. [sounds weird, but is not unusual formulation in Japanese] Aaaahhh, my entire body is sticky [or "my entire body is covered in a sticky substance]


I hope all of you enjoy this.

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Thu Feb 11, 2010 8:20 pm

I must say that's rather cute, and yay for catgirl fairies
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Thu Feb 11, 2010 10:08 pm

Hi!

The_Prof wrote:I must say that's rather cute, and yay for catgirl fairies


Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I was actually thinking its silliness would appeal especially to you :) :) :)

And yes, catgirl fairies are really a nice thing, aren't they? Given that I decided to stray away from Zelda anyway, I figured I could then use my favorite fairy type as well (originally, I was thinking of making Luna a parody of Link and I remembered that there was some fairy in some of the later 3D games, but given that I don't really know him and would even have to look up his clothing, I chose rather not to).

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:10 pm

well DW the funny things about fairies in Zelda is that when you die and have one in a bottle, it revives you. A common joke is that Link eats the fairy to heal.
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:45 am

HI!

The_Prof wrote:well DW the funny things about fairies in Zelda is that when you die and have one in a bottle, it revives you. A common joke is that Link eats the fairy to heal.


Wait a second - you said it is done when Link dies. But then, that would mean as a combat protocol:

Link has died.
Link has turned into a zombie.
Link the zombie has devoured (the brains of) the bottled fairy.
Link has returned to life.


Eeeewwwww, that is rather creepy (T_T)

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby The_Prof » Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:30 pm

Deathworks wrote:HI!

The_Prof wrote:well DW the funny things about fairies in Zelda is that when you die and have one in a bottle, it revives you. A common joke is that Link eats the fairy to heal.


Wait a second - you said it is done when Link dies. But then, that would mean as a combat protocol:

Link has died.
Link has turned into a zombie.
Link the zombie has devoured (the brains of) the bottled fairy.
Link has returned to life.


Eeeewwwww, that is rather creepy (T_T)

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well in game the fairy just floats around him and his hearts go up when he goes unconcious... He tends to be alive and just eating the fairy to restore lost health when the joke is implied. So let's just say to make it less creepy that he's falling unconcious and grabs and eats the fairy as a last ditch effort
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:03 pm

Aww DeathWorks that was such a cute comic!!! ^w^ i don't care if your rusty, your girls are so sweet looking :P And i like the wolf girl idea....
Oh haha is that supposed to be related to the "Pandora's box of female preds???" XDDDD

Well OF COURSE Link eats the fairy, what other way is there hurr hurr
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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby Deathworks » Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:12 pm

Hi!

LunaTheWolf wrote:Aww DeathWorks that was such a cute comic!!! ^w^ i don't care if your rusty, your girls are so sweet looking :P And i like the wolf girl idea....
Oh haha is that supposed to be related to the "Pandora's box of female preds???" XDDDD


Thank you so much for your kind words. They really mean a lot to me.

Yes, the 4-koma idea cropped up when I suggested you had opened Pandora's Box. Since we are on a vore site here, connecting Pandora's Box with a mimmick was kind of a natural move. And from then onwards, it were more or less classic elements - like the reference to lost virginity (Pandora's Box treats getting opened just like having lost her virginity) and the resulting marriage (be together for the rest of our lives). The unwilling groom is of course a classic for gag manga. I don't know how the idea with the licked fairy entered, but it was probably that I couldn't resist having two mouths available - one for talking and one for licking :) :) :)

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Re: Luna drew f/m o.O

Postby LunaTheWolf » Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:19 pm

Your very welcome ^w^

So... is a 4 koma a short japanese comic? I had to know.
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