Engulfed

[Tervicz]

I only have one reasonable good vorestory so far. I'll be working on a new one. This was written shortly before I stumbled on the concept of vore.




Engulfed





The Droncards were a wealthy family. They had an enormous residence. A mighty chateau surrounded by vineyards. The Droncards were in the wine business and over the years they had acquired a comfortable life in the Burgundy-region in France.

They had only one son, Alexandre, who they had sent to Parisian university. It was June and Alexandre was allowed by the school to return home while he was studying for his final exams. With a little luck Alexandre would graduate in less than a month.

The young man was pretty confident of his graduation. He had studied al lot in advance and there was very little he didn’t know yet. This seemed to be a vacation after months in the overcrowded city. He loved his home. He wished to take the vineyard from his father one day, but his father had other plans.

“Good to see you home son. I’m so happy you’re here.â€

[Rodent]

Hey Tervicz,

An enjoyable story. I recall you having posted it once before, some time ago, though I don't recall where that had been.

It's always fun to look back at things that were created before learning about vore and how wide-spread it is, as that allows you to see your thoughts on vore, before being influenced by others.

Between discovering aspects of vore that you never considered before, to trying to create something that others will enjoy, rather than only for yourself, the topics and content of artwork and stories will change over time. So, it's nice to have something like this to look back on and see what your mind was like before we corrupted it.

Rodent

[Scratch]

I liked it. The snake was wonderful; she has enough thought and emotion to be a bonified character, but at the same time, something about the way you write her movements and actions suggests what a snake should be: powerful, direct and instinctually driven. That leaves the intellectual conflict to the boy, which shines as he decides his fate as it, well, engulfs him:) Overall a great _story_ story, especially for a first.
I'd love to see more like this.