Jurassic World - Zara's End
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Jurassic World - Zara's End
Hey, everyone's blowing up over the release of Jurassic World - and not just voraphiles, either. Zara's death scene has attracted attention, both positive and negative, from all corners. Regardless of whether you think it's in somewhat poor taste (which is a perfectly valid opinion), it remains one of the most prolific and explicit vore scenes in recent memory. I've been encouraging artists not to let this opportunity to produce vore-inspired content go to waste (scatological pun not intended). I decided to compose a brief narration of the scene, though I certainly don't want to discourage anyone else from doing something similar. We're sitting on a veritable gold mine, here, and I'd love to see any other art or fiction that people can provide.
This is my first attempt at erotic writing. It was fun, but also kinda awkward, so please let me know if it's too overwrought in parts. Also, feel free to inform me of any typos or awkward wording so I can remedy it. Thank you all, and I hope you enjoy!
This is my first attempt at erotic writing. It was fun, but also kinda awkward, so please let me know if it's too overwrought in parts. Also, feel free to inform me of any typos or awkward wording so I can remedy it. Thank you all, and I hope you enjoy!
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EnigmaticJester - Somewhat familiar
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Bit long-winded but extremely hot nonetheless. Please keep up the amazing work.
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I actually really enjoyed this. Well done.
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My personal preference is avoidance of more realistic emotions in unwilling prey, but that's just me. Good stuff, you managed to be long-winded without being uninteresting.
Have any plans for future sources of inspiration?
Have any plans for future sources of inspiration?
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Very well done indeed. I loved it. <3
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Anashi - New to the forum
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Out-fracking-standing!
This is a GREAT story!
Thank you for putting into words, what I imagined.
This is a GREAT story!
Thank you for putting into words, what I imagined.
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LOVE IT! Oh, man, I am so glad you decided to write this!
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ElPortero wrote:LOVE IT! Oh, man, I am so glad you decided to write this!
Thank you! That means a lot to me coming from you! I really appreciated those stories you wrote for Karbo way back. Your prose added a lot of flavor to his art and made it even better!
And as I said earlier, the more Zara content we can get, the better; I'd love for this site's best writers and artists to offer their own takes.
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I totally plan to recreate Zara's end visually. And an alternate ending for Claire.
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nyte wrote:I totally plan to recreate Zara's end visually. And an alternate ending for Claire.
Would that be with or without bacon?
(More) seriously though, can't wait.
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I cant find a clip of the Scene!
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nyte wrote:I totally plan to recreate Zara's end visually. And an alternate ending for Claire.
Looking forward to it!
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Just saw the movie again, and I was amazed at how well your story lined up, beat for beat. Truly incredible work you have done here. Except for elongating the amount of time she is alive in the belly, I wouldn't even begin to know how to write my own version to improve on yours. It really is SO GOOD!!
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Loved it!
Always cool to see talented vore writers (that is, writers I like )
That said, I wonder if anyone's gonna try a comic take on this scenario, considering the spectrum of emotions one can inject into vore stories.
Always cool to see talented vore writers (that is, writers I like )
That said, I wonder if anyone's gonna try a comic take on this scenario, considering the spectrum of emotions one can inject into vore stories.
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ElPortero wrote:Just saw the movie again, and I was amazed at how well your story lined up, beat for beat. Truly incredible work you have done here. Except for elongating the amount of time she is alive in the belly, I wouldn't even begin to know how to write my own version to improve on yours. It really is SO GOOD!!
Haha, I had to make sure it was as accurate as possible. It makes it easier to convince myself it's canon. Hell, my interpretation may not be that far off if the statements of the alleged editors/screenplay readers are true (come on, Blu-Ray!). Thank you for the compliment, but don't sell yourself short!
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kdanielss wrote:Loved it!
Always cool to see talented vore writers (that is, writers I like )
That said, I wonder if anyone's gonna try a comic take on this scenario, considering the spectrum of emotions one can inject into vore stories.
If by comic take you mean a drawn version, then yes, I plan to do one. If by comic, you mean, funny...no, I'm not, haha.
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nyte wrote:kdanielss wrote:Loved it!
Always cool to see talented vore writers (that is, writers I like )
That said, I wonder if anyone's gonna try a comic take on this scenario, considering the spectrum of emotions one can inject into vore stories.
If by comic take you mean a drawn version, then yes, I plan to do one. If by comic, you mean, funny...no, I'm not, haha.
One can have both, comedy is a matter of timing. Just like being in the belly of a sea monster is best time for a status update.
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Wow, that was great! Jurassic World had some great vore in it, and expanding on it with creative writing is a fantastic idea! I can't imagine I'm the only one who got a boner at that scene..
But great work, seriously, that's by far my favorite scene in the movie, and you made it 100 times better in writing <3
But great work, seriously, that's by far my favorite scene in the movie, and you made it 100 times better in writing <3
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That was utterly fantastic.
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kdanielss wrote:nyte wrote:kdanielss wrote:Loved it!
Always cool to see talented vore writers (that is, writers I like )
That said, I wonder if anyone's gonna try a comic take on this scenario, considering the spectrum of emotions one can inject into vore stories.
If by comic take you mean a drawn version, then yes, I plan to do one. If by comic, you mean, funny...no, I'm not, haha.
One can have both, comedy is a matter of timing. Just like being in the belly of a sea monster is best time for a status update.
Alternate scat ending with obligatory "That is one big pile of shit" joke.
Anyway, if you go to the Jurassic World boards on IMDB, there is more talk about her than any other character. She's gaining momentum:
We need more vore art of the scene first and foremost, but I'd also be really amused by other interpretations: like a giantess Zara eating the Mosasaur, or her facing off with the Indominus in the Mosasaur's stomach.
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