KOS-MOS Xenosaga vore, good? not good?

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KOS-MOS Xenosaga vore, good? not good?

Postby Jrrrobert » Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:00 pm

I did this a bit back and it seems a little silly to me. I did not know if others would be interested or whether you guys thought it would be good enough to be photoshoped. If you do and would like to see it coloured, please let me know!
I was thinking of calling it something like "KOS-MOS Breaks the Chain of Command" implying that it is Shion that was swallowed.
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Postby Eka » Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:10 pm

Eeks, don't know what Xenosaga, but this is definitely good!

Her eyes look a little off center, but beside that I really don't know what else to say. You really should finish this drawing in my opinion
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Postby Chaotic » Tue Jan 10, 2006 11:20 pm

Wow nice. A little work on the face would help but all in all it's pretty good. I'm a big fan of Xenosaga and the whole Kos-Mos eating Shion scenario has been playing through my head. Thanks again.
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Postby Jrrrobert » Wed Jan 11, 2006 12:39 am

I should have the coloured on up before too long. I was not able to go back and redraw it at all, so I fixed what I could digitally as I coloured it.
Hope you like it.
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Postby ChristyRai » Wed Jan 11, 2006 8:10 pm

Mrrrrr! More KOSMOS! VORE! Woo! nice one!
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o.o!

Postby Figaro » Wed Jan 11, 2006 8:23 pm

ABSOLUTELY incredible. There really isn't enough KOS-MOS vore. ^^
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Postby Kisiro » Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:26 pm

Hehe, eh, I'm not picky. I say it's very nice. Keep up the good work. =)
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Postby Jrrrobert » Wed Jan 11, 2006 11:56 pm

I am glad it has been recieved well. It was created out of the same motivation as my Renamon vore, it was something I wanted to see and wasn't finding.
I am sorry to say I did not get a chance to finish it today x.x I had to much shit on all fronts. I promise it will be soon though!
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Postby Jrrrobert » Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:55 pm

"KOS-MOS Disrupts the Chain of Command" - By Vangardt
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Okay, I stayed up late to finish this. You guys owe me!
XD Hope you like it. It was the best I could do to fix the problems without being able to find the original and work on it from there.
If you are somehow a big fan of my work, I would consider taking requests...maybe even get a gallery here eventually, once I have enough to fill it with.

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Postby Kisiro » Fri Jan 13, 2006 1:35 am

Awesome job! ^_^ I love it. Look foward to more in the future.
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