Merlovinit Work-in-progress thread (M/M softvore)
Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2016 4:45 am
Hi,
I have a gallery here, but it takes a long time for me to finish decent artworks. I guess its mostly just sorta lonely when I don't have something new to post. I'll post my WIPs in here, as a teaser for the final versions and also just to criticize it and talk about trying to improve as an artist. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, feel free to share them.
I'm currently starting a comic/sequence that will feature the new pedator I came up with, Alistair.
Info about Alistair (from the submission)
The prey is a really innocent and friendly Druid boy. The first pic establishes what the Druid character is like, before Alistair finds him.
I'm pretty happy with the scene layout. The character's lineart needs to be fixed up a lot. The arms and hands are too big and the feet might be too small. I also want to make his chest/abs seem a little less buff, because he was originally supposed to be on the thin side. I like the face and hair, but the hair might need more definition and he needs better eyebrows. The hands obviously have to be redrawn but it usually takes me 10+ tries to get a decent looking hand.
I also want to have him casting a spell that is causing the flowers to grow. I sort of tried it here, but it doesn't look too great.
Overall the series will be much more high quality than any of my previous work. It will probably take a few weeks to complete if I'm being totally honest though T_T
I have a gallery here, but it takes a long time for me to finish decent artworks. I guess its mostly just sorta lonely when I don't have something new to post. I'll post my WIPs in here, as a teaser for the final versions and also just to criticize it and talk about trying to improve as an artist. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, feel free to share them.
I'm currently starting a comic/sequence that will feature the new pedator I came up with, Alistair.
Info about Alistair (from the submission)
Spoiler: show
The prey is a really innocent and friendly Druid boy. The first pic establishes what the Druid character is like, before Alistair finds him.
I'm pretty happy with the scene layout. The character's lineart needs to be fixed up a lot. The arms and hands are too big and the feet might be too small. I also want to make his chest/abs seem a little less buff, because he was originally supposed to be on the thin side. I like the face and hair, but the hair might need more definition and he needs better eyebrows. The hands obviously have to be redrawn but it usually takes me 10+ tries to get a decent looking hand.
I also want to have him casting a spell that is causing the flowers to grow. I sort of tried it here, but it doesn't look too great.
Overall the series will be much more high quality than any of my previous work. It will probably take a few weeks to complete if I'm being totally honest though T_T