Vore Audio - Short Narrative
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Hadn't had a chance to listen to them until now
They're all wonderful as always
Loved the voice mail one ^^
They're all wonderful as always
Loved the voice mail one ^^
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Thanks everyone! I was feeling down and insecure! I'm happy that I didn't disappoint you, Ryanshowseason3, your script reminded me of an erotic movie I one watched, only the man didn't get eaten, he got his rocks off. It all happened on a bus, and he was a stranger to the woman. I look forward to the edited version with sound effects! The last one you did made me giggle and tear up, I thought it was so cool. Next Thursday I have three scripts to read...So far. Thanks everyone I really need this support to keep going.. I hope to get better each time. Can I ask you all something though? Should I not use the sexy tone non stop and just throw it in for effect, or keep with the sexy breathy voice continuously?
Please comment and let me know. Because the first take I did for you, RyanshowSeason3, I used my conversational voice, and I liked it a lot, but I felt that you wanted dark and menacing.
~Hestia~
Please comment and let me know. Because the first take I did for you, RyanshowSeason3, I used my conversational voice, and I liked it a lot, but I felt that you wanted dark and menacing.
~Hestia~
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
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Deleted.. It was a repetition completely unnecessary . Sorry folks.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Hestia042 wrote:Thanks everyone! I was feeling down and insecure! I'm happy that I didn't disappoint you, Ryanshowseason3, your script reminded me of an erotic movie I one watched, only the man didn't get eaten, he got his rocks off. It all happened on a bus, and he was a stranger to the woman. I look forward to the edited version with sound effects! The last one you did made me giggle and tear up, I thought it was so cool. Next Thursday I have three scripts to read...So far. Thanks everyone I really need this support to keep going.. I hope to get better each time. Can I ask you all something though? Should I not use the sexy tone non stop and just throw it in for effect, or keep with the sexy breathy voice continuously?
Please comment and let me know. Because the first take I did for you, RyanshowSeason3, I used my conversational voice, and I liked it a lot, but I felt that you wanted dark and menacing.
~Hestia~
It was great actually. It works because you're addressing another woman not your prey. There's no reason to be menacing to her. I liked that it was so casual. Casual vore is kind of a niche of mine in writing.
I can't take credit for the other one that added the stomach noises. That one was someone else who enhanced it.
I can't speak to using "sexy voice" non stop. I haven't listened to the others yet. It'll be my reward for finishing the VN.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Would also like to say that the readings are excellent, and get even better each time.
As for which tone to use, I feel you can alternate depending on what best fits the script. The breathy voice is very nice, but I'm sure there are times when a more casual tone would be just as good.
As for which tone to use, I feel you can alternate depending on what best fits the script. The breathy voice is very nice, but I'm sure there are times when a more casual tone would be just as good.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Thank you everyone for your suggestions! I want to improve and just knock your socks off! I can't wait for my net day off, so I can record some more . And as always I am looking for scripts... Please submit them, You could be hearing me read them for you!
~ Hestia ~
~ Hestia ~
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Here's the finished audio product of my efforts.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1U80xj8yv6C
What you should really check out though is the VN version linked to in this thread over here: viewtopic.php?f=79&t=48336
It's got manips, visuals and the subsequent text conversation between the pred and the wife. Which may take a turn you weren't expecting...
Been a pleasure working with you. Hopefully I can again in the future.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1U80xj8yv6C
What you should really check out though is the VN version linked to in this thread over here: viewtopic.php?f=79&t=48336
It's got manips, visuals and the subsequent text conversation between the pred and the wife. Which may take a turn you weren't expecting...
Been a pleasure working with you. Hopefully I can again in the future.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
So far, I've only heard the audio... I love it! It made me giggle. I'm going to the link next! Thanks for all your hard work editing!
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
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~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Hestia042, incredible work on all of them! And I predict that now that ryanshowseason3's VN has been release, you're going to be getting a lot more attention.
Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with the rest of the forum.
Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with the rest of the forum.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Thank you so much! I have another one I am getting ready to post in the next half hour or so. It was my first kinda fan art! I loved their idea and couldn't wait for my day off to record it! I hope I did the script justice, I still have a few others to do as well...There are so many amazing writers out here in Eka's! I feel so honored that they want me to read their works!
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Written by Dinobonoid . I was so touched, they saved the file as Hestia042.. How could I not? That was so sweet! TYVM! (F/? - Implied Digestion)
To all of my other authors I promise I will get to them all Thursday! <3
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0BdbvduMAZW
To all of my other authors I promise I will get to them all Thursday! <3
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0BdbvduMAZW
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
ryanshowseason3 wrote:Here's the finished audio product of my efforts.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1U80xj8yv6C
What you should really check out though is the VN version linked to in this thread over here: viewtopic.php?f=79&t=48336
It's got manips, visuals and the subsequent text conversation between the pred and the wife. Which may take a turn you weren't expecting...
Been a pleasure working with you. Hopefully I can again in the future.
Love that it started with a burp
Think things where getting a bit too graphic for me though
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
ryanshowseason3 wrote:Here's the finished audio product of my efforts.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1U80xj8yv6C
What you should really check out though is the VN version linked to in this thread over here: viewtopic.php?f=79&t=48336
It's got manips, visuals and the subsequent text conversation between the pred and the wife. Which may take a turn you weren't expecting...
Been a pleasure working with you. Hopefully I can again in the future.
Love that it started with a burp
Think things where getting a bit too graphic for me though
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
I'm sorry it was too graphic for you. Did you check out the newest one? Might be a bit more to your liking! Thank you for listening!
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Tomorrow is new release Thursday. I am always looking for scripts, please feel free to inbox me your ideas, you never know, it might be your script I read next. Talk to you all tomorrow!
~ Hestia~
~ Hestia~
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Hestia042 wrote:I'm sorry it was too graphic for you. Did you check out the newest one? Might be a bit more to your liking! Thank you for listening!
I did, it was a good one ^^
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
I'm happy that you liked it!
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Amazon - Implied digestion, F/M prey, weight gain,implied disposal,macro/micro
Another gem from Toranges. Thank you for your support!
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1NrGuxVMTz4
Another gem from Toranges. Thank you for your support!
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1NrGuxVMTz4
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
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~Hestia~
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Monster girl, Naga, F/?,implied digestion/implied disposal,
Toranges again.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s04UDUqPCjV3
Toranges again.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s04UDUqPCjV3
Last edited by Hestia042 on Thu Nov 17, 2016 9:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Beautiful job on both of them, yet again! You're so good at this!
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