Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Forum rules
This section is for any artist, writer, animator, or any form of creation to share their work in order to receive comment to improve themselves better.
Read the rules in detail here
Read the Critiquing suggestion here
Please open only one thread per person. Detail here.
This section is for any artist, writer, animator, or any form of creation to share their work in order to receive comment to improve themselves better.
Read the rules in detail here
Read the Critiquing suggestion here
Please open only one thread per person. Detail here.
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
@Jaykayeight: I'd still love to read yours too! Send it to me please
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Really looking forward to all of these
(Do hope you'll find some way to incorporate burps into these in the future)
(Do hope you'll find some way to incorporate burps into these in the future)
- nnn4463
- Somewhat familiar
- Posts: 139
- Joined: Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:17 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
@nnn4463.. I will try my best, but I don't burp a lot. I don't drink carbonated beverages to make me burp. Sorry.... I want to try to do my own sound effects. I'm trying to convince my husband to be the muffled voice of distress for me.Maybe when he gets over his upper respiratory infection he will join in the frivolities and general debauchery.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Until then I've got some sound fx to stand in heh. I gathered everything the other day and constructed the voicemail message and then the background stomach noise with muffled screams.
-
ryanshowseason3 - ???
- Posts: 2484
- Joined: Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:00 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Just as an experiment, I spent a few minutes tuning up the audio quality a little in the first recording. Brought out the low end a little and added some stereo element to make her sound more 'surrounding,' and added a few other minor enhancements.
Overall, I think it sounds warmer and more sensual this way so I thought I'd submit it for you guys!
I'm a sound technician by hobby, and have the software to really make this sort of thing pop but I can only do so much with a low quality recording (not bad acting in any way Hestia, I love it. just saying the hardware isnt doing you justice).
Not committing myself to "enhancing" everything posted here, but just wanted to see what I could do in a few minutes with this for fun. I could do a lot more if theres interest for it though. I may make a more genuine 'muffle' version that some people may enjoy, as I can pretty admirably apply filters and hi-cut EQ to make it sound like the listener is actually inside her, though don't ask me to add gurgles/groaning/heartbeat, I don't feel like digging up appropriate sound files for that.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/58oqlsgix3uzrkh/XVOR.mp3?dl=0
Overall, I think it sounds warmer and more sensual this way so I thought I'd submit it for you guys!
I'm a sound technician by hobby, and have the software to really make this sort of thing pop but I can only do so much with a low quality recording (not bad acting in any way Hestia, I love it. just saying the hardware isnt doing you justice).
Not committing myself to "enhancing" everything posted here, but just wanted to see what I could do in a few minutes with this for fun. I could do a lot more if theres interest for it though. I may make a more genuine 'muffle' version that some people may enjoy, as I can pretty admirably apply filters and hi-cut EQ to make it sound like the listener is actually inside her, though don't ask me to add gurgles/groaning/heartbeat, I don't feel like digging up appropriate sound files for that.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/58oqlsgix3uzrkh/XVOR.mp3?dl=0
-
Vae - Somewhat familiar
- Posts: 151
- Joined: Wed Nov 27, 2013 4:46 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Ryanshowseason3 and Vae thank you. I appreciate anything you want to contribute to enhance my work. Ryanshowseason3 I will be doing your script first on Thursday. I have the day off so I can focus on it. I have been chewing on it for a while, trying to think of the right way to get that story across. I'm excited! All week at work I've been in a fantastic mood, because of your script. I can't wait to read it! Thank you all, for allowing me the privilege of reading for you.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Vae wrote:Just as an experiment, I spent a few minutes tuning up the audio quality a little in the first recording. Brought out the low end a little and added some stereo element to make her sound more 'surrounding,' and added a few other minor enhancements.
Overall, I think it sounds warmer and more sensual this way so I thought I'd submit it for you guys!
I'm a sound technician by hobby, and have the software to really make this sort of thing pop but I can only do so much with a low quality recording (not bad acting in any way Hestia, I love it. just saying the hardware isnt doing you justice).
Not committing myself to "enhancing" everything posted here, but just wanted to see what I could do in a few minutes with this for fun. I could do a lot more if theres interest for it though. I may make a more genuine 'muffle' version that some people may enjoy, as I can pretty admirably apply filters and hi-cut EQ to make it sound like the listener is actually inside her, though don't ask me to add gurgles/groaning/heartbeat, I don't feel like digging up appropriate sound files for that.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/58oqlsgix3uzrkh/XVOR.mp3?dl=0
Think I could achieve the same with something like Audacity?
I don't think it'll be necessary for my script but it'd be good to know for future projects.
The only thing I figure is that you'd want to cut some of the higher frequency end of the signal. The flesh of the belly would block some of that sound or otherwise reduce the amplitude in the higher ranges.
-
ryanshowseason3 - ???
- Posts: 2484
- Joined: Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:00 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
ryanshowseason3 wrote:Think I could achieve the same with something like Audacity?
I don't think it'll be necessary for my script but it'd be good to know for future projects.
The only thing I figure is that you'd want to cut some of the higher frequency end of the signal. The flesh of the belly would block some of that sound or otherwise reduce the amplitude in the higher ranges.
Yeah, the typical effect is achieved with a hi cut shelf but, in theory, we could pull out a much more believable sound (without sacrificing clarity) by applying multi-band compression on parallel tracks to separate frequencies. The 50 hz range is bliss for creating that 'muffle' but rather than just shelfing it down to that (which results in a sad warble of unintelligible bass which is, if we're being honest, the most realistic outcome, but sounds like trash) we could probably just emphasize it in one track, add some modeling reverb (small room), and use the other track with literally 100% mix of the reverb (no actual track, just the 'echo'), and no low-end EQ. Along with all of this, double every track used a second time, pan half of them left, half of them right and create a stereo effect that enables the good-headphone crowd to feel the sound literally surround them. (p.s. if you're listening to anything through laptop/phone speakers you will not benefit from like, anything im talking about here.)
The effect would produce the "Womm womm" low belly obscurity of the dialogue, as though through flesh, as well as a slight (like, barely a millisecond or so) delay to some barely-distant sounding clear vocals (With some muffling, but not as much).
i.e. we hear the low-end 'chest voice' surrounding you coming from the reverberations of her body and separately hear her 'head voice' coming not from within, but the actual sound waves that have left her lips traveled through the air, and only permeating the outer layer of belly.
This effect is not necessarily 'realistic' but would produce an appealing effect I think and yeah, with a LOT more work, you can accomplish similar results by jury-rigging Audacity and I encourage you to do so if you have the time! I've got the higher-end software which makes it all quite easy, but not the time to do much.
-
Vae - Somewhat familiar
- Posts: 151
- Joined: Wed Nov 27, 2013 4:46 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Tomorrow afternoon, I will definitely have Ryanshowseason3's script read and posted along with a few others. I'm so excited, in more ways than one
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
I just finished reading three scripts all different and endearing in their own ways! Thank you,my delicious little authors! Lord Hubbington will be uploading them soon
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
This was written by Ryanshowseason3- very talented individual! I really enjoyed working on this. It took 2 takes, and because it was well written, that's all I feel it needed! Thanks again Ryanshowseason3.
I called my latests victim's wife and left a rather unsetteling voice message for her. They named it "Voicemail" (F/m - Same Size- Digestion)
https://chirb.it/I5BsDm
***UPDATE*** I think I might have to give this one another try.
~Hestia~
@Ryanshowseason3 What do you think?
I called my latests victim's wife and left a rather unsetteling voice message for her. They named it "Voicemail" (F/m - Same Size- Digestion)
https://chirb.it/I5BsDm
***UPDATE*** I think I might have to give this one another try.
~Hestia~
@Ryanshowseason3 What do you think?
Last edited by Hestia042 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Titled "The Morning After" Toranges is the actual author. the after effects of a night of overindulging, gave me a bit of a bellyache. (F/M - Digestion - Weight Gain - Gassy - Chubby - Same Size)
https://chirb.it/mzy3fB
***UPDATED***
@Toranges Where are you my friend? I miss you
~Hestia~
https://chirb.it/mzy3fB
***UPDATED***
@Toranges Where are you my friend? I miss you
~Hestia~
Last edited by Hestia042 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Another gem from Toranges. After shrinking a restaurant of people down and eating them one by one, there is one lone guy who fainted from stress and fear, and I just had to play with him, like a cat to a mouse. I appreciate the sharing ! Thank you so much, I have so much fun reading these aloud.
https://chirb.it/rkqJgy
(F/M, Macro/Micro, Implied Mass vore, Digestion)
***UPDATED***
~Hestia~
https://chirb.it/rkqJgy
(F/M, Macro/Micro, Implied Mass vore, Digestion)
***UPDATED***
~Hestia~
Last edited by Hestia042 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Toranges work again! I think we have a budding author here, people!
(F/m, Macro/Micro, Digestion)
***UPDATED***
https://chirb.it/rkqJgy
~Hestia~
(F/m, Macro/Micro, Digestion)
***UPDATED***
https://chirb.it/rkqJgy
~Hestia~
Last edited by Hestia042 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
From an anonymous poster on 8chan. Evil Huntress talking to her prey (F/? - Digestion)
***UPDATED***
https://chirb.it/brfzI0
~Hestia~
***UPDATED***
https://chirb.it/brfzI0
~Hestia~
Last edited by Hestia042 on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:32 pm, edited 2 times in total.
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
I appreciate all of the love and support I have been recieveing, along with the many scripts. To keep me going we thought this might be a good idea. Stop by, have a look and see what you think. Thank you so much everyone, I really appreciate what you've been doing. I hope that this is the beginning of an amazing and new adventure for us all. Thank you ~ Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/VoreTaunts
https://www.patreon.com/VoreTaunts
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Oh my god! Were they THAT terrible? I haven't heard from anyone that had written a script, except for Toranges, who is wildly talented! Thank you again, Toranges for the newest script. I will do it for you next week!
If you like what you hear, click the link below, help me continue to create eargasams for the masses.
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
~Hestia~
https://www.patreon.com/voiceofHestia042
-
Hestia042 - Participator
- Posts: 212
- Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2015 8:33 pm
- Location: Midwest United States
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
Not at all. I'm just a busy bee. Thursday was a 14 hour shift at work and I only got to it today.
I'm working at it though and added all my sound effects and what not.
I'm stalling though on releasing the audio until the finished product is ready. That consists of...
The script to my gallery, a set of manips linked in the script and also put on my manip thread, posting the audio here, as well as...
A renpy VN to tie it all together. I'm looking to visualize it all with the images the script said were going to be texted to the wife along with their subsequent correspondence.
It was going to be a surprise but I thought better to just give you feedback since I don't see it getting done until sometime Sunday.
Otherwise the take you did was fabulous. A couple breaks where I think I might not have been a clear enough director in how I imagined things being read but you actually nailed a few things I was worried wouldn't come off right without being in my head. Especially the part where you explain being on the crowded bus. I thought with that flurry of commas you might not get the pacing I was going for in a spoken voice but you shocked me. I couldn't have directed you better.
The only other thing is the pauses I mentioned could have gone longer for the audio I wanted to insert there. But I'm fixing it in post by splitting audio and time shifting to create silence.
Don't worry, you did great!
It's my turn to polish my turd and then place the crown jewel you gave me atop it.
I'm working at it though and added all my sound effects and what not.
I'm stalling though on releasing the audio until the finished product is ready. That consists of...
The script to my gallery, a set of manips linked in the script and also put on my manip thread, posting the audio here, as well as...
A renpy VN to tie it all together. I'm looking to visualize it all with the images the script said were going to be texted to the wife along with their subsequent correspondence.
It was going to be a surprise but I thought better to just give you feedback since I don't see it getting done until sometime Sunday.
Otherwise the take you did was fabulous. A couple breaks where I think I might not have been a clear enough director in how I imagined things being read but you actually nailed a few things I was worried wouldn't come off right without being in my head. Especially the part where you explain being on the crowded bus. I thought with that flurry of commas you might not get the pacing I was going for in a spoken voice but you shocked me. I couldn't have directed you better.
The only other thing is the pauses I mentioned could have gone longer for the audio I wanted to insert there. But I'm fixing it in post by splitting audio and time shifting to create silence.
Don't worry, you did great!
It's my turn to polish my turd and then place the crown jewel you gave me atop it.
-
ryanshowseason3 - ???
- Posts: 2484
- Joined: Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:00 am
Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative
I'm also quite surprised at the lack of feedback here. Hestia, the readings were enthralling. Your skill at acting the part is developing quite nicely and it shows with the quality increase in each and every script you read.
A grateful shout-out to each of the authors as well. I genuinely enjoy this interesting medium and hope to see it expand!
Ryanshow, making audio edits? I hope you have success! I'm actually taking m own advice from earlier a little at a time. I've made a 15 second test/sample clip as a proof-of-concept that worked very well, just chipping away at wide application of the methods myself.
A grateful shout-out to each of the authors as well. I genuinely enjoy this interesting medium and hope to see it expand!
Ryanshow, making audio edits? I hope you have success! I'm actually taking m own advice from earlier a little at a time. I've made a 15 second test/sample clip as a proof-of-concept that worked very well, just chipping away at wide application of the methods myself.
-
Vae - Somewhat familiar
- Posts: 151
- Joined: Wed Nov 27, 2013 4:46 am