Dumb mice stories

[Tassie]

Months back, I'd the notion to write stories of what it could be to live the life of a mouse, particularly the life of a mouse of whom watching her kind devoured became a fascination.

The first story is here:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/362099

The second story was completed this evening, after much personal debate.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/369847


I'm terribly sorry if I come across to be desperate or insecure, but I feel as though perhaps I shouldn't write this sort of thing. Most obviously, I am not the best writer; I'm certain to find mistakes to correct, then repost, but what of the content? Were I to finish a third and fourth chapter, would there be interest sufficient to be quite worth the effort?
Please be honest. Surely it would hurt more to merely imagine the fans here love this sort of thing, only to find out later they'd rather not have to see it. Sorry to make myself such a bother.

[Tril]

I thought they were a good read!

Felt a little bad about White Mouse though.

[Tassie]

I thought they were a good read!

Felt a little bad about White Mouse though.

Thanks. I appreciate greatly hearing such. Sorry to say, looks like this will be all that is written for this series. Not much interest, sorry.

[Tril]

No worries. I understand! <3 Thanks for everything thus far.

[Tassie]

No worries. I understand! <3 Thanks for everything thus far.

You are quite welcome. I tried writing another story that came from a bear's mind, but I guess the concept is too foreign. The unfinished ideas for the mice story were to be feeding the frog a much larger mouse and then a pair of mice; sorry those won't happen.

I have a different story that someone is letting me post, since I was allowed to use their characters and expand beyond their plotline. I hope to have that posted tonight.
It's far more normal a perspective, so I hope more people like it rather better.