Eka's Portal Writing Group - March - Open

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Eka's Portal Writing Group - March - Open

Postby Imrhys » Sat Feb 04, 2017 3:12 pm

March is now Open!

The EPWG is a casual monthly topic for authors to post short stories or portions of larger stories and get guaranteed feedback. Everyone is welcome to participate! Authors who submit a story any given month are asked to read and comment on the three stories that are assigned to them that same month, but you don't have to be an author to read and give feedback, and authors don't have to limit their feedback just to the stories assigned to them. You can check out the guidelines for participation here, and you can participate in the discussion surrounding the EPWG here, if you'd like.

Authors of all skill levels and interests are welcome (see the guidelines for details); please just make sure you do your best to proofread your submission, and make sure it in some way is related to vore or endo, given the nature of this site.

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Need a little inspiration to help you get started? How about participating in this month's Theme/Challenge?

Suggested Theme for this month - I've got nothing this month, apologies >_>

Remember, the Theme is completely optional. If it does not help your writing, then do what works best for you.

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DEADLINES:
All submissions for March must be posted in this topic by 11:59pm, Wednesday, March 1st.
All critiques for March must be posted in this topic by 11:59pm, Thursday, March 30th.

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Re: Eka's Portal Writing Group - March - Open

Postby Imrhys » Sat Feb 04, 2017 3:12 pm

To enter this month, just read the first post to make sure you know what's going on, and fill out a copy of this template in your own post! :)

Instructions: Quote this post when you post your submission. Everything in bold should stay, and everything not in bold should be deleted or replaced. Attach your submission as an .rtf or .doc or .txt or .pdf, or post a link. If you link off-site, make sure it's publicly accessible (no password-protection) and isn't swarming with ads or is poorly-formatted.

ABOUT YOU:
Your name: Answer with how you prefer to be called in posts. (Example: 4ofSwords)
Your writing library URL(s): (Example: http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=102910)
Have you read the rules and guidelines, and do you agree to them? (They're only 1127 words. Consider them good preparation for your reading assignment.)
In particular, have you read the part about providing meaty comments (at least two or three good paragraphs, and try to answer the author's questions, if any) on the three stories you're assigned, and do you agree? (This is the heart and soul of the reading group - it's important.)
Have you proofread your own story? (Yes is the only good answer!)

YOUR POST:
Title/Summary: Let us know a little something about the story. Make this part compelling to help you get readers! (Example: Spider Woman. She's a science experiment gone wrong. He's from some shadowy government agency. He … err, the other 'He'... is dinner! Lust, intrigue, and plenty of spidery vore and cocooning!)
Word Count: Give an accurate, discrete, positive integer. There is no hard limit to word count, but stories assigned readers aren't responsible for more than the first 2000 words or so, and stories over 5000 words should be considered for breaking into smaller chapters.
Rating and Classification: Let us know what kind of vore and how much. Be sure to let us know if there is sex, gore, scat, digestion, etc., since those tend to be the major touchpoints. (Example: Rated “R” for descriptive nudity, sexiness, and naughty words. Contains F/M spidery (oral/vampiric) vore.)
Type of Critique Preferred: Do you want it harsh or gentle? In-depth, or impressionistic? Are you looking for the reader to pay special attention to technique, or to grammar, or to style? (Example: Harsh/honest critique is preferred. Tell me what you liked or didn't, or what took you out of the reading experience. Specific examples preferred.)
Questions for the Readers: If there's anything in particular you want the reader to think about or answer, here's your chance! (Example: Was her monologuing a bit much?)

YOUR READING LIST:
Rating and Classification Preferred: Tell us what you'd prefer to read or not to read. (Example: I like sentient female preds. I dislike scat, pain, and cockvore. I will read anything from Pokemon fanfic to the scenes that make Larry Flint blush.)
Critiquing Style: What kind of a critic are you? (Example: I'm a pretty harsh critic who is easily hung up by bad spelling and punctuation. I'm handy at suggesting alternative wording/plot points, etc.)

Don't forget to attach your writing!

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Re: Eka's Portal Writing Group - March - Open

Postby Stanku » Sun Feb 05, 2017 5:08 am

About time I partook in this thing again.

ABOUT YOU:
Your name: Call me Stanku
Your writing library URL(s): https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/Stanku
Have you read the rules and guidelines, and do you agree to them? Yes
In particular, have you read the part about providing meaty comments (at least two or three good paragraphs, and try to answer the author's questions, if any) on the three stories you're assigned, and do you agree? Yes, I get it.
Have you proofread your own story? Proofed!

YOUR POST:
Title/Summary: "Little Red." Another reinterpretation of the classic tale of Little Red Riding Hood, spiced with some unoriginal inversions.
Word Count: Google Drive says 3673 words.
Rating and Classification: Explicit sex and violence. Tags: soft vore, hard vore, implied digestion, wolf, M/f.
Type of Critique Preferred: Anything really, so long as it's thought-out.
Questions for the Readers: Was it too purple?

YOUR READING LIST:
Rating and Classification Preferred: Gimme the goods -- all of it!
Critiquing Style: What kind of a critic are you? I tend to focus on narration and overall structures like the plot's and the scene's. With porn the quality of depiction, especially its originality, is a major indicator for whether I like the fic or not. In any case you can trust to hear my honest opinion.

Link to the fic: https://aryion.com/g4/view/374311
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Re: Eka's Portal Writing Group - March - Open

Postby Imrhys » Sat Mar 18, 2017 3:32 pm

Due to RL events and complications, EPWG, at least with me running it, will have to be suspended until at least April, at the latest May, while I work to sort out some things. One of these things is whether or not I will continue as the group moderator.


Stanku wrote:About time I partook in this thing again.


Apologies, Stanku. Just bad timing.
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