A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

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A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby boomer91 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 6:38 am

So I need suggestions... please, help ;)

I've drawn a little poke trainer... well, he's actually a bit embarrassed but he's 18 and still hasn't gone out adventuring yet!

He's got a cute little Rattata to start him off, but he thoroughly overestimates his abilities

Question is... what's lurking on the route outside his house? Waiting...


Just can't decide which pokemon to choose as a pred. I'd prefer something that'll show a nice bulge, and preferably a bit humiliating....

Suggestions?
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby jimmy112367 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 6:51 am

eevee
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby boomer91 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 6:57 am

jimmy112367 wrote:eevee


Eaten by an eevee? Damn, shit trainer
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 7:20 am

Gothita
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby thehunter01 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 7:51 am

Typhlosion
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby CalinBeast » Wed Feb 22, 2017 10:18 am

Persian. It was made to be a pred. d:
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby JackHereTheRealOne » Wed Feb 22, 2017 11:08 am

There are a few base form pokemon I can think of; Ekens, goomy, charmander, vulpix, dratini, just to name a few off the top of my mind
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby MarinLaFey » Wed Feb 22, 2017 12:58 pm

Well humiliating but realistic could be anything a Rattata would be weak against, which in both forms would be fighting. Normal pokemon however, fighting is their only weakness I think. With dark, there's bug and fairy.

So what would be extremely humiliating but realistic? Anything that knows fighting type moves. Which could be elekids, tyrogues, similar things.
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby jimmy112367 » Wed Feb 22, 2017 2:23 pm

how about a glameow cat vs mouse
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby Borealis » Wed Feb 22, 2017 4:21 pm

Arcanine? :0
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby Tyslan03 » Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:46 am

Jigglypuff or clefairy or something cute like that.
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby likegulp » Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:33 pm

arbok or Seviper snake eat rats
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Re: A Poke Trainer's First (and last) Adventure

Postby CrystalKiller88 » Wed Apr 26, 2017 8:55 pm

Humiliating? Hmmm...

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