Eis Brecher (gore warning)

[angrytiger12]

(if i have done this wroung let me no im new to this)

my mate and love Jamjo with the editing with this

this is an idea that got stuck in my head after hearing about puella magi madoka magica, if people like the idea i may go back and make it into a full story.

Eis Brecher

Tabitha the Ice Cleric fearlessly walked into the dark mausoleum of the abandoned mansion, the monster she and her friends were hunting could be in here. The other four members of her team serched other areas. She wore armor made of ice with hues of blue and purple that followed every contour of her young body, it was topped with puffy clouds of snow the fluttered to the ground as she moved, and boosted her large bosom in a most becoming way. Her arms were bare save for the puffy gloves of snow with splints made of light blue ice along her forearms. Her legs were covered with segmented thigh high boots of blue ice with stiletto heels. Her creamy upper thighs were half covered with a half skirt of shards of clear ice that shield her round bum. She had short pale blue pigtails that hung over the sides of her jagged crown of ice. Her falsely blue eyes sparkled with a confidence that matched the smirk on her blue colored lips.

She looked around at the mounds of unnatural flesh around her, “you don't hide too easy do you.” she said as a long spider like leg creaked up from the floor behind her, the thing’s jerky movement belied the danger it posed. That spike on the end could pierce steel. It shot forward aiming for Tabitha’s back. The Magical girl spun on her heels and called out, “Gletscherschild” as she brought up her left arm to defend herself. The moisture in the air hardened into a dome of hard ice reminiscent of a spartans shield.

The conjoined defense cracked but did not fail Tabitha as she slid back a few feet on the stone floor, it didn't faze the high school girl. She just dismissed her shield and smiled. the leg was joined by a few more and shot forward. Tabitha smirked and took a single step back thrust out her white gloved hand palm out as she called, “Schneefest” a blast of snow shot from her hand and turned the limbs to solid ice inches from her.

The Ice Cleric held her hand up and yelled, “Eisbrecher!” this time the air hardened into a massive hammer almost as tall as her. She brought the ornate round headed weapon down on the limbs shattering them to nothing.

“Haha! stupid thing.” Tabitha taunted before a loud roar of pain shook the building. She quickly summoned a new shield as she turned toward the noise. Wielding her ice hammer with one hand was not a problem for the magical girl.

The largest mound of bulging flesh rose up like an elephant sized legless centipede. At the tip of the towering thing, nearly thirty of the sharp legs opened like a grotesque flower revealing a mouth of razor sharp teeth. Several tentacle like tongues spilled from the now drooling maw and licked its ever hungry lips. Tabitha gulped back her fear behind her white shield as each tongue jabbered words of the old world with their own mouths full of more teeth.

She was in trouble.

However the Ice Cleric just had to hold on till her friends showed up, with that roar they had to be on their way. This place wasn't that big, was it? The maw lurched for her and she gave it a mouth full of her shield, Tabitha slammed her hammer into the monsters neck, breaking two of the legs around its mouth. She step back as the multi ton monster reeled from the cold shock wave that traveled through it.

“Okay, Tab, you got-.” the Ice Cleric's pep talk was cut off by an unseen leg snapping up from the floor and stabbing through her bare thigh splattering her blood on her clear ice skirt. She yelled in pain and lifted her hammer only to have another leg stab through the back of her shoulder. She curse and screamed in pain as she was lifted from to the floor. Her weapon dropped from her grip and shattered on the floor.

“No! no! no!” Tabitha wailed as the mouth move closer as if it wanted to get a good look at her, “please no! come on girls hurry?” she prayed as another pointed leg descended from the ceiling. It tracted over her breast pulled some of the snow cloud with it as it followed her clavicle till it was aligned with her throat. Before the trapped girl could say another word the spiked limb shot forward stabbing up through her chin and didn't stop until it hit bone.

In that same instant her eyes and hair became dull brown and her clothes reverted to their normal form. Knee high white socks with tasteful brown dress shoes, a burgundy plaid skirt and white polo shirt. Finished with a burgundy vest with her school's gold lion badge over her heart.

The old world horror wasn't done. The segmented legs holding its prey creaked as they began to pull in opposite directions. blood oozed out of the dead girl til a series of tearing and popping crunches signaled the bones and flesh of her neck and arm giving up in a final loud, bloody crack. The decapitated body hung from its pierced hip. Its one arm almost touching the hunks of melting ice on the floor. More of the pointed limbs plucked the head from the other leg it was stuck on. The monster had a use for the fallen magical girl’s head. As it stuck the arm in the gnashing mouth and slowly suckedit in, more legs or fingers appeared to move the head to a certain other mound.

This mound move much like the other with the mouth but it ended in a smaller hole with only two pointed legs. They gripped the head and turned it till the bloody hole was aligned with a fleshy tub that extended out towards it. The tube slipped in and pulsed rapidly a few times till a glowing orb entered the tube, it looked much like a glowing frog egg as it was pushed up the flesh pipe and disappeared inside the head. A slight glow could be seen through its vacant eyes and mouth as the ovipositor with drew and the head turned nest was move to a safe place on the for side of the room.

The door to the mausoleum burst open and four more girls Tabitha’s age rushed in armed and armored in a similar way she had been but each was different as well. One in a dress made of lightning and metal with a stringless bow in hand. Beside her ran a girl with a lion’s mane of fire and a tail like a solar flare, in her hands she clinched a two handed sword. Above them flying on the wings of white feathers with a gown of leaves and a spear in hand was an older blond girl. The last bring up the rear was a girl in rags with tendrils of molten earth trailing from her arms.

Their battle charge came to a sudden halt. They gasped seeing their friends hand disappear into the horror’s mouth. The monster of nightmares past didn’t react to the magical girls as it pushed its jibbering tongues into the torn shoulder of their fallen team mate’s remains, they could be seen moving under the skin before the mouth closed on the body’s chest and tore away almost half its torso leaving half a cage of broken, almost cleaned ribs. The destroyed uniform shirt and vest fell away revealing what was left of what use to be a near perfect pair of pale freckled breast its bright pink nipple pointed at the four friends almost accusingly.

They had never lost a friend before, in the month they been hunting these monsters after school, they had seen people killed just like this or worse. They had been injured, bitten, cut, thrown through windows and they still came out on top, but here it before them was proof they wouldn't always.

With tears in her eyes the lion maned girl lead a renewed charge, she jumped almost to the ceiling and roared, “Beenden! Sonnenflamme Schrägstrich” the white blade of her sword light the room as she came down on the beast like a like a burning comet with a cutting edge.

The flying blond girl screamed through her sorrow, “Beenden! Windsturm Schub!” she became a whirlwind of tears and feathers that tore through the air like a drill.

The girl in rags slammed her fist into the ground calming calling, “Beenden! Brennende Erde Tod Griff.” fingers of burning earth burst from the ground and closed around the monster.

Electricity danced on the archer’s pointy ears as she raised her bow, she pulled back the nonexistent string on her weapon and called, “Beenden! Donner Pfeil brutaler Schuss!” she loosed a bolt of lightning that was followed by an army’s worth of bolts.

Even the greatest known horrors couldn’t have survived the combined force of the girls most powerful attacks all at one time. The massive mounds of flesh that made of the monster body was torn apart and destroyed by the torrent of magical force unleashed upon it, but the nest survived.

Tabitha was avenged!